|Reviews for The Party|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
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| YukiOwO chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
UWAHHHHH THAT WAS AWESOME!
| herrokirri0618 chapter 1 . 6/19/2015
This is one of the best fan fics I've read the details are just perfect. I kept grinning the whole time. Rating: OVER 9,000 !️️️ I loved it
| EVA LONDON chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
I love your story to was sooooooooooooo good
| aph.wank chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Oh my God... Your vocabulary is stunning and adds to the beauty of this masterpiece!
| TheBatgirl31 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Im pretty sure I reviewed this story before but I couldn't help telling you again how sweetand wonderful I think this story is! If you ever decided to play with these characters again I think it'd be really cool if you told England and America's side of the story.I think you could do a great job with that hehe you also do a great job at capturing the chemistry between France and Canada. I havea great love for this pairing and you do a great job with them!
| sweet-angel-o-mine chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Can I just say, that I TOTALLY LOVE YOU for that amazing story ! btw,it would be awesome if you'd write a parallel USUK story, how the party went for them :3
| flutefreak chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
This. Is. AMAZING!
| kyouko68 chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
So adorable! I feel like this pairing doesn't get enough love! They're so perfect for each other!
| chochochocho chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
So cute! Your stories are always so different from other authors in the way you're able to express each character's personality perfectly and entwine it with the others.
I... I want to know what happened on the USUK side of this story... XD
| lilactree chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
I'd love to read a sequel to this :) I'm imagining all the fights they may have over Francis' flirty ways :P. It would be great if Mattie took revenge to heal his ailing heart ;) Oh dear.. There I go again lol.
LOVED IT! 3 Definitely a favourite :)
| loppytaffy chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Another fantastic fic, as always; keep doing what you do!
(Not trying to be mean or anything- far from it; I love you writing style, but you need more commas; "Canada dude" should be "Canada, dude" because it's essencially a list of ways to call the character. And when you use "however" in a sentence it needs to be borded with commas; "Germany, however, was...". Just a little tip)
| MissSkulduggeryPleasant chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Yay! Oh, thank you so much, you've made my week! *sends out hug vibes* thank you, thank you, thank you! looking forward to more of your work :)
| 18dustyrose chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
That was really cute in an adult no kid should read way lol woo Franada!
| BlueberryKittenLover chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
You write beautifully! The characterization was amazing, and I didn't really find many grammatical errors, if any. I've been a fan of quite a few of your stories. This was very sweet, and I hope you continue creating more fine masterpieces