Reviews for Mortals and Svartalheim
Colbalt Sunfire chapter 1 . 1/31
Lol That ending... XD
Whispercloud chapter 1 . 1/11
Oh, Nick, if only you knew
Kurama's Foxy Rose chapter 1 . 12/2/2016
Continue please?
FateOfChaos chapter 1 . 8/21/2016
That ending XD
That was great. Tony being a God would be a shock. I wonder if Thor would insist on him going to Asgard?
vh132 chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
I like it, thank yooooou :) !
lany-chan chapter 1 . 7/14/2016
Great story! And the last part is hilarious!
Tekie Scythe chapter 1 . 6/26/2016
Oh man, I would love a full story with Tony as a demigod.
NatashaRomanoff chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
This is brilliant! Could you please please please do a sequel? I want to see who wins the arm wrestle and what happens next.

Who's team are you on in Captain America: Civil War? I'm on Team Stark.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
Very nice.
TheNightstriker chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
Hahaha I got a lot of good laughs outta this one XDXDXD Steve and Tony wrestling Natasha as the referee dang good times have come out of this and for that I thank you! XDXDXD :D Hope you have a great christmas
Darth Bubbles 16985214 chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
Hey Ocean, this is Bubbles, and I haven't really reviewed any of your stories yet. Now, I have heard through the grapevine that you enjoy long reviews. Well, I would like to see you continue this, and so I will just have to write a review long enough to convince you. Now, what can I write about? Well, first I, Darth Bubbles, hereby challenge you Ocean Breeze, upon your honor as a writor of fanfiction, to continue this story. Stark the demigod is a wonderful plot bunny, and needs furthur exploration. I would like to see this chapter commemorated, but a time skip so that we can see tony with the power during his life. What he can do, how he reacts et cetera. Of course, there is always the faint but unlikely possbility that you have nothing more to add to this story. In which case, I would like to have you write a plot bunny which popped into my mind. There is a man who works as an agent for shield. (Psudonym is up to you) at the end of the battle for ny, right when thor is about to transport loki back to asgard, this man steals the tesseract, in the process revealing hinself to be Jormandugar Lokison. He uses the cube to teleport to a different realm, trapping thor and loki on midgard. He then begins to unravel and destroy the prophecy of ragnorok, by releasing his siblings. They then travel back to midgard to take place in several canon movies, before reappearing in thor 2. Then they go adventure and screw with canon. Convinced yet? Jormanjugar would have the mindset of a rather sullen bitter teen, with the competence of any adult. This is because of a shitty childhood, poor father, and neglected life as a kid. Loki's kids would all presumably be able to use magic, and jurmajugar must be able to shapeshift into a human. I would really love to see this. Just to encourage you, I will write a little skit.

"What in the world!" Fury shouted loudly, as the grinning agent vanished in a flash of light.

Loki was dumbstruck, and his fingers were twitching in agitation. Thor wasn't much better.

"Who the hell was that! Thor, you recognized him, I can tell that much!" Fury exclaimed.

"That was the only Asgardian who has settled upon Midgard. One who owes allegiance to no man, and is rather bitter to all men. The man you had employed up until this point, was also known as Jormajugar Lokison. The World Serpant, and the prophesized bringer of Ragnarok, the Doom of the Gods."



So please write this. Please please please.
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 11/12/2015
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
awal216 chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
Oh my God, I almost died from laughter. Lol! XD
LittleMissTrickster chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
I love this story, especially with the ending. I naively love all your stories.. oh well.
consultingsorcererof221B chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
Well I liked it. I recognised a lot of the lore you used here but just out of curiousity did you base it off of stuff that happened in the comics? Because from what I can tell a number of the comics ARE based heavily off of the Norse lore
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