Reviews for The Fast Lane
OTHlover04 chapter 11 . 1/15/2005
good story!
melodie chapter 11 . 5/16/2003
please continue it's really good.
mckenzie chapter 11 . 10/9/2002
hey! i really loved ur story! oh my gosh! i was like on the edge of my seat! holy crap! awesome! if there was a better word, i'd use it! if u wanna get a hold of me, or maybe we can work on a story together, i'm a writer too, i have aol messenger! so give me yell thru email if ya want! loved ur story!

Pandy chapter 8 . 10/7/2002
Interesting concept, except for the OFC, she isn't well written. Lance was Johny Tran's cousin. This needs a major over hall with the help of a beta.
BlueEyedGemini chapter 8 . 10/7/2002
OMG this just keeps getting better. Update soon. This is a great story

lil diam0ndz not signed in chapter 1 . 10/7/2002
what in the hell happened to jesse? is he not in this story world?
Kamuela chapter 7 . 9/22/2002
Wow! That's an awesome story. I really liked it and I hope you write more soon. I really don't know anybody's name in that movie, I don't have the best memory, but great story! The plot is really great and twisted...loved it! :~)

TheOtherTJ chapter 5 . 8/22/2002
dude great story. i really like it. email me when u have more.
letty girl 101 chapter 4 . 8/8/2002
cool keep writing
sam chapter 3 . 8/6/2002
That was good. What happened to hector!
LJ chapter 3 . 8/6/2002
Hector being killed off? There's a new one... quite original... lol. Sounds interesting.
letty girl 101 chapter 2 . 8/5/2002
please i'm begging you let letty and dom be together and by the way great story.
LJ chapter 1 . 8/2/2002
Oh, come on. At least make it original, instead of the original story twisted around to make your character God.