Reviews for Doubt
Hoplite39 chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Nice story.
Fox.House chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Awesome as always! I really loved the 500 word short. Get work and even better last line. Keep up the great stuff. I will be waiting for more deliciousness.
The Allusive Man chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
This deserves a 500-word review, but you know I'm too lazy for that. Suffice to say, I loved it. Great imagery, excellent economy and word arrangement, even some alliteration. Magnifique.
JoleeKee chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
This. Is. Great. Made my eyes tear up.
millsenberry chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Love this! "You look like shit"... Ha! Such a thing Shep would say!
gabrielle chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Nice and well written, as always
AD Lewis chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Short and well written :)
WordKrush chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
Very nicely done! Absolutely loved it!

"Her knuckles are red, raw, his white and pale."
I love this. It's so perfect. Nine words that conjure nine hundred images.

"Blood fills her sclera like a rose."
Wonderfully vivid imagery, and use of a common element (flowers) cinches the beginning and end together brilliantly.

The only inconsistency? The ventilator. With a ventilator breathing for her, Shepard would be unable to speak.