Reviews for Broken Hearts Can Always Mend
MikariStar chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
aw the ending was cute I like almost any PS4 couple exept HanhSaya but that's just because I don't like Saya ;; There should be a sequeal to this story!
Shinrialtu chapter 1 . 12/4/2003
Very Good story, I love is well-written, has fluff in it, and is a continuity of my fav. Sega game.
However, there IS one stipulation, and it's a big one...
Are you ready for it?
YOU DIDN"T PUT CHAZ/RIKA TOGETHER!
C'mon, Chaz ain't like that. You should give him another chance; besides, every couple has rough patches...
I'm saying this because I REALLY like to see Chaz and Rika together; it just seems right.
However, you're the author here, and it's your decision. I just think that many people would like to see a great fluff fic. Chaz/Rika in it...
One other thing.. I realy like your story. Keep writing...
Dark Maiden Kira chapter 1 . 11/6/2003
Rika and Rune huh? Hmm...interesting. I look forward to seeing what other twists you have in mind _
psfan chapter 1 . 4/1/2003
The writing is good. But I would have liked it much better if Chaz wasn't so cold and Rika wasn't left so broken. I envision a full and happy future for the two. Maybe they could stay in love with eachother, but add some drama through a tragedy that strikes, seperating the two. The problem your writing seems to have, the same one I have struggled with, is that you need to describe more. Elaborate, stretch it out. Describe Rika jumping from the ship. Don't give up with writing, but please- give Rika and Chaz a happy future...
Smack54 chapter 1 . 9/22/2002
This is not a flame, I repeat this is not a flame. Ok here we go praise before bitter tirades is the rule. Spelling and grammar are good, check. Length of chapter good, check. Descriptions of action acceptable, check. Characters are in Character, and the truck plows into a Dezolis ice wall. Let's think of situations after the game ended. Chaz and Rika together while the other characters went thier seperate ways. Ok reunions are fine and trying to get Rika with Rune is a swell idea but your going about it all wrong. First thing Chaz would have no need for a 9-5 job (all the money my group had at the end of the game could budget a small country) and if he did work it would be Hunter work seeing that it is his profession. And everyone is terribly OOC. If you want to break up Chaz and Rika you need to come up with a better way to do it than for chaz to drink and sleep around. Remember this is a phantasy world not reality. Keep trying.
Deth Apacolypse chapter 1 . 9/5/2002
Okay I'm a little pissed. Your messing up one of the BEST relationships in any video game I've ever played (1000). WHY DOES EVERYONE NOT LIKE RIKA AND CHAZ TO BE TOGETHER. I mean I know there is artistic rights and personal prefernces but hey. Anyways if your wondering why I'm so mad the reason the ending is left so open is because if you can't tell Rika and Chaz when the picture of the two them is taken on that field its been years already. Nobody ever realizes that fact.
Chaz Ashley chapter 1 . 8/4/2002
Yeah, I'd like to see where this is going! Keep up the good writing!
Fuu-sama chapter 1 . 8/3/2002
oh no...how could Chaz do that to her and so soon? hmm...i never thought Chaz would be the one. i want to see what happens next so keep writing!