Reviews for Things we hide
qalleesyawesome chapter 23 . 1/18
noooooo don't end it here! i want to see what happen to Naruto and Hermoine.. Anyway this was awesome and i can't wait to read more of your stories.. This was the best NarutoxHarryPotter crossover i have ever read. thank you so much. Keep up the amazing work.
qalleesyawesome chapter 1 . 1/18
nooooooo don't stop here! i wanna see what happen with Naruto and Hermoine.. but anyway that was awesome cant wait to read more of your stories
Ruin The Extinct chapter 23 . 1/12
This story is the single most perfect, most beautiful and tear jerking and best story in the whole NarutoxHarryPotter fandom...
Seriously...
I think you(although I know you won't) sold consider writing a sequel in the deathly hallows with a bit of focus on NarutoxHermione...
PLEASEEEEEEEEE
armydancer01 chapter 1 . 1/10
Oh my gah. This story was great and made me so so happy
SoulMore chapter 23 . 1/9
FAN!~
Guahanboy98 chapter 23 . 1/9
Is there going to be a sequel?
miuruzeny chapter 23 . 1/9
This was a one beautiful, touching and amazing story. I waited so long for this chapter, to Naruto come back to them. Thank you for writing this awesome fanfic!
LeeArt chapter 23 . 1/9
Wow, I can't believe that this is the last chapter, thank you so much for sharing this amazing story and I most definitely love the friendship/romance betweeen Naruto and Hermione, although you had stated that there will be no sequel I'm hoping you could write a last chapter of what would happen after the war had ended in HPverse, will Naruto go back to Konoha and probably brings Hermione along, or will he stay at England? Anyway it's been a great journey with this story and I'm hoping that you could write more HP/Naruto or HP/other with Hermione being one of the main character like this.
Guest chapter 23 . 1/9
Thanks for everything.
DocSlendy chapter 23 . 1/9
5 years and still giving me feels!
Dhea30 chapter 22 . 12/23/2017
Oh please update this! Don't end it on a teaser cliffhanger like that! O.O
Guest chapter 3 . 11/2/2017
UR STORY SUCKS
x102reddragon chapter 22 . 9/7/2017
Oh please update soon
Col chapter 11 . 9/3/2017
Funnily enough, your Kakashi and Tsunade actually addressed Naruto's unprofessionalism. But the other thing I take issue with is the rampant bashing of the rest of Team 7. I mean, I'm not sure if you mentioned it before because I don't always read the ANs, but yeah. I mean, Sasuke, Sakura, and Kakashi are basically villains with no other redeeming qualities, while Naruto is some sort of angsty saint along with the rest of the Golden Trio. 2D characters don't make good characters. Literally, no one is even flawed in the way that you want them to be. Everyone has a single defining characteristic and that is the only thing that defines them. Sure, I do see some attempt at humanising Team 7, but you've basically turned them into villainous caricatures of themselves. Mind you, I'm not saying this to bash or insult your fic. I think it's amazing that you've managed to write something so long, but pretty much every character here is barely worth being called a character, because they're merely a single characteristic. Honestly, you should probably warn somewhere that this is essentially a Team 7 bashing fic, because I (and many others) tend to avoid those like the plague.
Col chapter 9 . 9/3/2017
Honestly, I feel as though the entirety of Team 7 have completely lost the purpose of their stay at Hogwarts. I mean... aren't they supposed to be there to protect Harry? Naruto is so caught up in his own angst that he can't even do his job. I know it's just a story, but I don't understand Tsunade's logic for sending them on the mission. I mean, you could say that it was for Naruto's and Sauske's protection, but what she's essentially doing is making the client pay for a subpar and lousy service. It's like if I ordered fresh bread and you gave me a stale loaf because you had too many stale loaves. I don't get what I paid for. Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but Naruto's unprofessional, angsty behaviour ticks me off. I mean, his angst makes him come off more as pathetic than as having any real character...
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