Reviews for Odds in our favor
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
It's very good, please update
Guest chapter 2 . 2/4/2014
What about gale?
Will Katniss abandon him?
Guest chapter 2 . 2/4/2014
Wait did i just say omg
Write more
Please please pLease please please please please please please
squidlings chapter 7 . 5/1/2013
Ooo I like it!
Bexy chapter 6 . 4/19/2013
DO NOT DELETE IT, please its really good an please do more chapters...
(just one thing, there are quite a few lacks of puntuaction, which sometimes makes it hard to understand
Neville'sEcotopia chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
I don't quite understand how they can be only "friends" then only a day later he asks her to marry him. It seems a bit sudden considering her mom and Prim already know.

On a side note, it's a little distracting and confusing trying to figure out who's point of view I'm reading from the whole time. At first it seems like no-one in particular, but then it randomly switches to Katniss or Gale. An easy way to fix this is to have separate sections (Gale's POV, Katniss' POV, etc.) .
Euronite chapter 6 . 4/19/2013
Don't you dare delete it.
mangere275 chapter 3 . 4/19/2013
Im a little lot now! ish...
mangere275 chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
AWWW they do make a really great couple!
squidlings chapter 6 . 4/19/2013
May chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Goes on for too long, and your tenses (present tense, past tense) are constantly changing. Also, you switch between first person and third person point of view. Another thing is the whole Katniss/Gale relationship. If they're together, just say that in the beginning, please. I think your story has potential but is made boring by your frequent grammar and tense issues; they impede meaning.
willow hawthorne chapter 5 . 3/29/2013
i dont like your story at all! gale would never treat katniss like that. go what a disappointment!
ptl4ever419 chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I love the story, but its kinda confusing because I can't tell whose point of view it's from. 1st person keeps cropping up in the story, which I think you're trying to write in 3rd so it's a bit confusing. I'm not saying this to be mean, but to let you know because if your plot wasn't as good as it is I probably would stop reading it because its frustrating to try to understand. I really hope you don't take offense to this and that you keep writing and that this helps a bit :)
squidlings chapter 5 . 3/29/2013
Aww so cute! I like that last part the best
HOC97 chapter 4 . 3/19/2013
another brilliant chapter realy loving the story :)
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