Well I'm glad you put that note that there wouldn't be any lemons so that I would not waste anymore time further reading the story I wish you had put this in the beginning cuz if you had I wouldn't even have started reading the story & since you said you don't/won't put/use lemons in your stories I will not bother with any of your other fanfic.

sigh, harry is a perfectly fine name and there is zero reason for it to be hadrian that they named their son. now i wont say it doesnt allow for some narrative points... because if oaths exist, then hadrian swearing an oath as harry james potter would fail to work. the problem with that is it wouldnt cause a backlash, because it wasnt a valid oath and therefore serves zero point narratively.

of course, the author could make-up something like failed oaths all act the same regardless if they were valid or not, but then oaths would be 100% meaningless pieces of magic and therefore, wouldnt be used. trying to justify his name being hadrian is a catch-22.

dumble playing god yahova god the father hubis as no bound dumbledoor

dumbles you QUEER FUCKING ARSEBANDIT CUNTY BOLLOCKS lol

ron sucking dumbles cock you prat lol

Bumbling dialogues, missing commas, teenage emotions... No, thanks.

...(sharpening the blade of olympus) im gonna gut this old fuck!

na, na, na, na, na, na, na, na, hey, hey, Goodbye~.

Seriously, the story is too haphazard and things change so randomly...

Needs to be re-written.

Peveravll story was well done

The lesbian thing has been done to death
Less than 10% of the world population is lgbtq
So less than 5% are lesbian
Yet it seems to pop up a lot more often in fanfics.

Love the necklace!
Well done

No se... fue una lectura incomoda. Dumbledore no tiene sentido, ¿porque le dio el testamento justo ahora? ¿Por qué le lanzó imperio? Esos son actos de un idiota del calibre de Ron Weasley no del maestro titiritero Albus Dumbledore...
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Luego están los dos idiotas Weasley hablando sobre los planes al aire libre como si nadie pudiera escucharlos... y Hermione se sintió muy forzada e incomoda.
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La trama porsupuesto es buena, adoro la trama

HAREMc closed or naw

wow a stretch so hard its taffy ...neat

Very different. I enjoyed it. It took a bit to get past chapters 1-4 but after that it was good.

Only thing I Hate is Harry dieing so young.