Reviews for True Colours Show
ClaireR89 chapter 30 . 2/12/2018
Tonks * Not thinks
ClaireR89 chapter 32 . 2/12/2018
You might need to reword/rework Harry catching fire
ClaireR89 chapter 31 . 2/12/2018
Shouldn't Thinks be Mrs. Lupin-Potter or even Mrs. Tonks-Potter?
ClaireR89 chapter 26 . 2/12/2018
I don't understand Toms death? Like what a waste.

Remus I'm sad about this didn't see that coming
ClaireR89 chapter 23 . 2/12/2018
Little early for Daphne. Hermione is possible at 8 months
ClaireR89 chapter 21 . 2/11/2018
So where's Ginny?
ClaireR89 chapter 14 . 2/11/2018
If Ginny is in the mines how is she a pairing for Harry?
ClaireR89 chapter 13 . 2/11/2018
The scene with Minnie how did it flip from her mistakes and errors to suddenly being Harry's fault?

I think my issue with this story is that almost seems fake how people are acting
ClaireR89 chapter 9 . 2/11/2018
Something is off with the story. I can't place it but while reading, it just seems... Awkward (?) IDK the right word
BillBrink chapter 36 . 2/5/2018
A most interesting story. My biggest problem came at the climax. We all knew it was headed for the epic battle, but when it got there you didn't explain how in the world Albus assembled his forces to fight Harry's. I thought the castle was empty and Harry was going to use its grounds for the battle. Since Harry chose the place and date, how did Albus know where and when? With forces that large he couldn't have assembled them immediately. Did Harry's army appear and issue a challenge through the news? The battle itself was anticlimactic. Other than Draco and Albus it appeared to be in the background, and Albus disappears with a whimper.
I know this story was a lot of work. Thank you for sharing it with us.
BillBrink chapter 5 . 2/4/2018
Now I KNOW this is fan fiction, when the father of a teenage girl tells her boyfriend to escape adult supervision, get drunk, and have a naked swim with his daughter on their first date. Belief in magic is easier than belief in that male teenage fantasy:)
Nemo7777 chapter 7 . 2/3/2018
Seriously?

"So, yeah I was an evil wizard for years and by the way, I stalked and assassinated your one remaining parent at Dumbledore's behest."

"i forgive you. Will you be my new daddy?"

Dropped with prejudice.
Brady B Da Beast chapter 15 . 2/2/2018
I cried at the part before the weddings, where he was talking to Sirius and said The Marauders code words. Heart strings have been played mynfroend.
Brady B Da Beast chapter 7 . 1/28/2018
I will admit the granfather thing was a suprise to me. Id it was in the books/movies, I only made it to book 2, ain't seen the movies.
xNaruHina chapter 14 . 1/24/2018
To be honest, half of those laws are utterly stupid. Why should calling people offensive names be illegal and fineable? I am not saying it is right to call people names but really? What is next, being fined for calling someone an asshole? Idiot? Then we have the whole legilimency thing... why should they have to register, do you have to register to practice Occlumency? DaDa? Charms? Then the Death Eater law... Everyone has some form of knowledge on Death Eaters. So everyone in Magical Britain is going to be questioned under Veritaserum? The other two laws were good though.
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