Parts of this chapter feel a bit rushed and thus are rather confusing to follow.

Albus Dumbledore is in danger of seeming incredibly stupid…

A. why cast the Imperius Curse on someone who is the master of one of the Deathly Hallows with another of the Deathly Hallows when you already know about him having control of one of the Deathly Hallows?
B. How does Albus not know that Harry is completely immune to the Imperius Curse?

Hermione placed ‘her head on her shoulder’ seems a bit redundant...

and oh arya grand father is going to be minister and alittle cross over with dragonball the potters will make sure charles will never died along with them and the fake prophecy will never happen and dumbledore's plan B will fail using his lover grindlewald lol

good thing in my story the two dark lords will fall by a 5 year old lol all of dumbledores plans will be known and air live even the one that knew about the horcruxes for years but refuse to do anything. loyailty potions and mid control is ban too dumbledore can't do anything about it. My story will be great and it will happen all before 1981

good thing in my stories will good not some crazy fan girl but ron will always be an ass clown and forgotten

Wow...I loved it!

Unicorns lol

Lily is a Muggleborn not a Pureblood. The fact that she is a Muggleborn is what made her so special. She was smarter, far more skilled, and far more powerful than those Purebloods. You making her a Pureblood is a damn shame :(

The Quidditch changes were stupid IMO. Harry should have just created a Junior Varsity team.

I saved it to he end, but I'm still gonna say it. Fleamont and Euphemia Potter Harry's grandparents, not Charlus and Dorea.

Good story but I feel like it was rushed the last several chapters. And plus, we never got to see the Weasleys' reactions to them having another grandson/nephew. What became of Lavender and her child?

And why oh why did you have to Harry at such a young age!? :(

Yes. Yesss. Burn it down :)

Burn that brewery down! Bring it all down! :)

Incredibly unrealistic. Pettigrew was weak. Remus would have thrashed him quite easily.

And what about Voldemort's Horcruxes?

wow, this was a great fiction! thank you for sharing it. *hands you scones*

Not a bad story, but the last chapters seemed a little rushed, until now it was "Cloack & Dagger" and suddenly it become a final battle like the Lord of the rings

*Gasp* I thought Katie and Dean were great friends of Harry!