True, it may be the end, but it was a great run, and yours isn't the first that I have read that had Harry dying all too soon. The main thing is that Harry DID have the Family that he had ALWAYS wanted, and having 25 kids by 5 women(?), and 15 Grandkids before his death (at the age of 50), is no mean feat. A fun read, all in all. Thank You. TTFN

Being the Marauder I am, after Harry made the proclamation that no one was to harm or threaten his wives, I would've immediately challenged Hermoine and Daphne to a pillow fight! Harry, I would've challenged him to a duel and the only weapons allowed were a rubber chicken and a wet blanket! The looks on their faces would've been glorious!

I could see Luna as being poly amorous. Frankly, from canon and the movies I'd be surprised if no one picked up on that. She just loves having friends and if that led to a more carnal nature then that would merely be an extension of the original love.

Dear Ron and Ginny enjoy your new jobs as dragon shit shovelers...LOL

Harry has Brought balance to the force, HMMM

The only problem I have with this chapter is why Neville and Luna weren't invited. I can't see either of them rejecting the Slytherins and should have been told Harry's story too.

Cool AU, the twist making Mad0Eye Lilly's bio dad seemed pretty original...

Ron getting the Love potion was a beautiful stroke of genius! Keep it up.

A long Journey yes but is was an awesome one.

After 10 months, the story concludes with an ending that rivaled JK Rowling's. Great job mate

This is fan fiction. It's up to you how you want to change things. I for one, am intrigued by this storyline so far. It's nice to see a sort of darker Harry Potter universe. I do think that when Harry and his harem get around to shagging that you make it as graphic and erotic as possible. You used an "M" rating, go for it.

I loved it, amazing job.

Great chapter and I hate to see the story end but I think you ending it on your terms was the best way for it to end. I liked the way you wrapped everything up and had Harry experiencing the happiness that he deserved. With the women he loves at his side Harry was able to do anything. Though I would have preferred to hearing him living into his 200's with a huge family around him that he lived and loved is enough for me.

Great job with this and good luck with the future works.

yes it was but so worth it thank you for this story

that was a great story, it is sad that all good things come to an end. However when reading about Harry's death I visualized the funeral song of Bruce Lee from the Legend of Bruce Lee and the scene that accompanied it, so it had a good effect on me.
Looking forward to the next story you claim to have on the burner.