|Reviews for The Workings of Fate|
| stupidlamb2010 chapter 26 . 2/7
| stupidlamb2010 chapter 6 . 2/6
Oh no. Poor coop
| stupidlamb2010 chapter 3 . 2/6
You go coop.
| stupidlamb2010 chapter 2 . 2/6
| 2brown-eyes chapter 2 . 2/1
I knew as soon as he said it to his father he would say it to Bella at some point. lol
| blb1000 chapter 27 . 1/20
Loved this chapter.
| blb1000 chapter 23 . 1/20
What's with the cold eyes?
| blb1000 chapter 12 . 1/20
| blb1000 chapter 11 . 1/20
But no pressure!
| blb1000 chapter 9 . 1/20
Ed is simply clueless in the dating game.
| blb1000 chapter 4 . 1/19
| blb1000 chapter 2 . 1/19
| pengirl25 chapter 27 . 1/8
I've been reading this fic for the last few days and I have totally and completely fallen in love with Cooper! You have done a grat job writing a mature Edward and Bella and I both laughed and cried throughout. I know you meant to write a "dorky" Edward, who no one found attractive, but I think that's just impossible haha! He's just perfect even when he's meant to be socially awkward ;) I can't wait to read the sequel (I'm heading over there right now in fact) and keep reading about this lovely little family you've created, and see Coop grow up.
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/28/2013
I'll gloss over any medical or legal issues that may or may not be correct.
What bugs me? Edward is an "Animal Scientist" and has ALWAYS been knowledgeable about animals and animal facts, right? And is always concerned about Cooper saying things properly? What bugs me is that Edward would be dismissive and ignorant on the point of monkeys vs. gorillas.
If it was Bella having this conversation with Cooper (or any other character), it would be fine. But Edward is an expert.
Not a big deal, I suppose, but it really is not keeping in character with him.
| UnderTheCandy chapter 6 . 12/12/2013
Unless youre talking about Flash Thompson from the Spiderman comics (which I doubt you are), there is no Flash in Marvel. Flash is a DC character.