Reviews for Flame
FindingThatDamnedOnePiece chapter 8 . 11/17/2014
YOU NEED TO UPDATE!
Crimson Ink Blot chapter 2 . 11/4/2014
well written fic, great work
Lilac Gemani chapter 6 . 6/5/2014
Great job!
Lilac Gemani chapter 5 . 6/5/2014
The nice thing about how Roy wants Hughes's murderer to receive the same treatment as Envy is... Envy killed Hughes. So Roy can give Envy double treatment! It's funny how popular fics with Ed raped by Envy looking like Roy, Roy helps Ed get through it and they initially fall in love
Half Demon Alchemist chapter 7 . 5/31/2014
Ehhhh update already seriously ily
The-Vegas-Lights chapter 5 . 4/22/2014
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LDK chapter 7 . 3/10/2014
It sucks that this fic is incomplete, but I kinda see what you mean in retrospect about this story changing as it went on and not being planned ahead for its direction. Don't get me wrong though, this is written absolutely beautifully. Even without the drama of the homonculi's nefarious plotting, it would still be a brilliant emotional story. I love Ed and Roy's relationship in the way you write it. For me, often their attraction seems creepy and weird and pedophile-ish, but you addressed these concerns by making the characters fully aware of the implications and taking a 'love conquers all' approach. God, Envy is such a fucking creeper. I really hope you include Mustang completely destroying him in your rewrite! I loved when you put in the part where Mustang vows to treat Envy like whoever murdered Huges. When I thought of his reaction to Envy killing Maes in the manga, then coupled with his anger at Envy for what he did to Ed... Holy shit. Really looking forward to reading the new (and improved?) version of this story, and thanks for writing this!
TheBadassAlchemist chapter 7 . 1/28/2014
This is so good. One of my fave RoyxEd fanfics. Looking forward to the rewrite :)
space boyy chapter 6 . 1/9/2014
Roy wanting to stay home with Ed makes me want to stay home from school and just read more of your stories.
space boyy chapter 5 . 1/8/2014
That was an awesome and fluffy ending.
space boyy chapter 4 . 1/8/2014
Holy fuck, I never saw that ending coming. It made me feel really bad for Ed. Geez, that's tough.
space boyy chapter 3 . 1/8/2014
Wow, Envy was really frightening in this chapter. Aw, damn, Edward. :/
space boyy chapter 2 . 1/8/2014
I could barely read this chapter because of Ed's confession. Geez, that's horrible. This made me wanna kill Envy.
space boyy chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
I loved this first chapter. Roy's character was perfect and Edward really makes the reader worry.
raelle23 chapter 6 . 12/25/2013
i'm really loving this story though i know this is going to sound really bad... and i'm kind of a bad person for thinking about this... but... um... how is ed going to use the bathroom if his insides are all messed up? i'm in pain just thinking about it. isn't he going to be in allot of pain and will it injure him further?
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