|Reviews for More Than This|
| explosionartist chapter 13 . 3/8/2013
Well that escalated quickly! Not like i care...:-) but another amazing upd8! Happy times :D
| explosionartist chapter 12 . 3/5/2013
| CrimsonDeath413 chapter 12 . 3/5/2013
o.O Did I ever tell you that I love you? No, I actually don't hink I have so let me tell you, now...
I love you, I love you, I love you... I FRICKIN LOVE YOU!
This is probably the best thing I have ever read in my life!
Kay... I'm gonna go now... Bye...
Have a nice day and or night, kind sir and or madam!
(P.S. I love you. You are amazing. And I'm probably creeping you out, right now...)
| MissArsenicChaos chapter 11 . 3/4/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Change the name of this. If you don't know there is a REALLY REALLY REALLY bad fanfic out there with that name. It is the worst finfic in history so I don't think you want this one to share a name with it. So if you can please change this name of this fanfic.
| Ohmygodwhy15 chapter 8 . 1/29/2013
I love it's sad but I love it oh an just so you know you killed me with all these feelings
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/26/2013
sad face :( i miss dave...
| Future World Or A Dream chapter 8 . 1/27/2013
Dave, no :(
Why, why did you have to bring up Dave's awesome raps!? That- that right there is feels inducing and i was not prepared.
I sometimes wish that the chapters were longer but in some ways i think it fits the style; i really love how the original format "Years in the future (but not many)/ You are being Bro/ et al" is carried over including use of the 2nd person.
Good work, I'm looking foward to the next update.
| Arfstar16 chapter 7 . 1/22/2013
Awwww this is really sad. I hope there is more chapters soon.
| explosionartist chapter 7 . 1/22/2013
So this is a time skip? I'm guessing so. This is a beautiful fan fiction i must say, but if your going to write such small chapters, you should update more often, if possible, i understand if you have school and home work, believe me i do too. Just try and update more! There are people who want to read your story! I'm really sorry if this comes as an offense to you but to me its a fan wanting more :-) i love this please keep going :-)
| Arfstar16 chapter 5 . 1/17/2013
When the next one, along with that i feel bad for bro because he is out of it. And can't focus on one thing... poor bro. John do something, talk to him
| Now chapter 5 . 1/14/2013
more more more please
because i wonder what happen next
| explosionartist chapter 5 . 1/15/2013
Oh my gosh... this is the saddest thing...even though I'm crying, I encourage you to keep writing. I look forward to the next chapter.
| CrimsonDeath413 chapter 5 . 1/14/2013
Actually, John... You need to cry, especially in front of Bro. He would understand, because he is probably close to tears as well...
Beautiful as always! Awaiting more of this sad story! Have a nice day and or night, kind sir and or madam!
((Creeper alert, Hide your childs!))
| Arfstar16 chapter 4 . 1/12/2013
Only two thing:
2)another NOW! please?