Reviews for Electrifying Ash
zdeath01 chapter 18 . 5/23
it seems like an crack fic on steroids now
Naevys chapter 8 . 4/25
Hmmm... I quite like this so far. A bit random here and there- but then again it is a parody! And still very interesting, I thought the the idea of Ash's travelling partners all having a 'convenient' doppelganger was funny though all their names are lost to me haha.
Xlxxledgendz chapter 17 . 4/1
Well that was the strangest chapter ever
Guest chapter 17 . 3/24
Maybe have Cynthia and Elsa sneak into his room or something? Haha would want to see Ashs face then
diegokpo30 chapter 17 . 3/25
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Gold Testament chapter 17 . 3/24
*face palms* okay seriously at least change the rating to M and put in the action, cause now it's just cruel teasing to pervs. Also I can't tell if Elesa would want to kill Cynthia, or share Ash with her now.
Gold Testament chapter 11 . 3/24
Okay your fic has the talk, change the rating and add the action.
Gold Testament chapter 8 . 3/24
Thunderus probably thinks the little guy would be a pushover.
Gold Testament chapter 5 . 3/24
I think Surge would've changed his tune when he found out Ash saved a Shiny Electivire from poachers and gained a WINGMAN in Zapdos.
Gold Testament chapter 3 . 3/24
You should really have a chapter with the perspective of the Pokémon Ash felt abandoned by
Refraction of Light chapter 16 . 12/7/2015
Hope ya update ya cunt. Just wanted to say that cause of what you said in chapter 16. Still I hope ya update, plus what the fuck happened to Misty?
Axcel chapter 2 . 11/8/2015
There was a comment in here about Ash's wealth being cliche and then saying it was a parody of a cliche. Dude, have you even played pokemon? You get more cash than you can even speed. By the end of the game, you're maxed out and don't even need to buy anything.
Axcel chapter 2 . 11/8/2015
There was a comment in here about Ash's wealth being cliche and then saying it was a parody of a cliche. Dude, have you even played pokemon? You get more cash than you can even speed. By the end of the game, you're maxed out and don't even need to buy anything.
Axcel chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
The only things that stopped Ash from winning all the Conferences he battled in were either outside interference, his pokemon being a dumbass, his opponent being a Gary Stu whose only purpose in the plot is to inexplicably defeat ash when everything from his pokemons' power and experience to the types battling should have made Ash win without real effort, or his opponent used a couple legendaries against him (whom several of his pokemon had defeated before in movies one-on-one and thus have no excuse for losing in the first place).

Basically, the plot is rigged against Ash, yet he still manages to finish high in the rankings with a newbie pokemon party each time.
Axcel chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
The only things that stopped Ash from winning all the Conferences he battled in were either outside interference, his pokemon being a dumbass, his opponent being a Gary Stu whose only purpose in the plot is to inexplicably defeat ash when everything from his pokemons' power and experience to the types battling should have made Ash win without real effort, or his opponent used a couple legendaries against him (whom several of his pokemon had defeated before in movies one-on-one and thus have no excuse for losing in the first place).

Basically, the plot is rigged against Ash, yet he still manages to finish high in the rankings with a newbie pokemon party each time.
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