Reviews for Embers Of The Future
chestry007 chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
This was lovely. Please write more Durin family fics. I know that Thorin worries about the boys too.
4everindscripts chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Angsty indeed. Now I have to think some more about how they're going to die. But from what I remember (and you can correct me if I'm wrong), the Battle of the Five Armies wasn't "planned". I mean the dwarves only thought they'd be facing down the dragon alone. Things just snowballed so that there was a battle between the dwarves, orcs and goblins, and the Elves and Men joined in as well...? Good one shot though :)
TheonJumpsShipLikeACoward chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Very well written. Fili certainly knows how to settle Kili.
Italian Hobbit chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
ugh you're killing me. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT ALSDKJFADF.
Aerophoinix chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
You did an excellent job keeping Fili and Kili in character, unlike many other fanfictions where the characters seem to lose some of their original personality you seem to be able to keep that image in your head and put it into words. I could totally see this happening just that way, nothing overly emotional just dark and sinister as is their journey. Great job!
karkatthekawaiiestvantas chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
*Strokes imaginary beard* Good, very good. I like this.
Mongoose Peasant chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Beautiful story 3
Chi du ciel chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
When I think to what will really happen I fell desperately sad. But that was very cute :)
1monster2 chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
I love this! Great job!
LiL PriNCeSs Me chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
sigh... why must Tolkien be so.. heartless? Great story, well done. You just have to love the closeness of them.
maplewind chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Ah, this was so sweet! The ending made me tear up though because of what acutally happens to them TTTT I would love to read how you would write their last moments (if that made any sense)
Cockapoo chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
This was so cute and sweet :)
Purestrongpoem chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Great story.
Tears of Eternal Darkness chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Aw, cute Kili is cute. Nicely done. -
Jubei-Kazuki chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
I loved the interaction between the brothers :) It's so cute how Fili
tries to comfort Kili .
Thanks for posting :)
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