|Reviews for Claiming of Fifty Shades|
| gogomohamad229 chapter 1 . 7/3
will you ever ever update?
| Guest chapter 41 . 6/26
Please continue this story I really love how Christian is in this it's so original I love it!
| niksta03 chapter 46 . 5/27
Please come back and update
| Guest chapter 46 . 4/8
if you are not planning to continue to end the story, i see some readers have offered to finish the story - it you are ok with that, i would love for someone to finish it and hopefully for HEA :)
| Cassondreya chapter 42 . 4/1
OMFG TWIST ME IS AMAZING!
| everafterhighdoll chapter 46 . 4/1
It's an awesome story I'd love to see ana fight Christian enough to kick his royal butt ness while he's down give ana something to really fight for then have Christian begging for ana enough to get obsessed and stalk her like crazy good luck
| Guest chapter 46 . 3/27
i thought u had just updated but then realised it was 2017. :P
wonderful work. addictive
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/17
Can I continue to write ur story if u have abdonded
| Ajal2007 chapter 46 . 2/13
please give us something ! PLEASE UPDATE!
| niksta03 chapter 1 . 2/6
| Lauramari chapter 46 . 1/22
I just came across this story and read what is here over the course of the day. It is a very interesting psychological thriller in a sense, but so far not a romance. You write very well and the story line is compelling. I am interested in seeing how this turns into a hea.
The other thing I have found interesting is the tenor of and scope of reactions reflected in the reviews. While it isn’t surprising that people will disagree about what Christian has done, I am dumbfounded at the multiple apologists for Christian’s efforts and those who even express or imply annoyance with Ana for her resistance. And why in the world would anyone find the consummation scene “hot.” Maybe they mean “hot” in the way nonconsenual pornography can cause arousal, but it is not “hot” in the sense that anyone could reasonably see it as desireable. Some even see what Christian has done so far as a kind of seduction. This is no seduction, at least not to date.
I understand that there are factors that might arguably partially mitigate Christian’s loathsomeness, but if that consummation scene was less than rape, it wasn’t much less. To those reviewers who disagree, consider this. Yes, people might commonly turn to prostitution because of desperate circumstances, but what I can’t get around is that Christian intentionally and with great malice caused the series of unfortunate events that led to Ana’s desperation for the sole purpose of coercing her to have sex. Mere knowledge of her desperation raises consent issues even if Christian had not been the cause, but the fact that Christian did cause all the unfortunate events that led to Ana’s dubious “agreement” , destroys ANY illusion of consent at all. I may be wrong, but I think the author would not disagree this assessment. This coercion is part of the story, which is being told very well. Look at it this way, if Christian raised a weapon and threatened to put a gun a bullet in Ray’s head unless Ana became Christian’s sex slave, wouldn’t you call it rape, even if she ultimately gave in to save her father? How is what happened here different in any material way? I think Christian raped Ana or engaged in something very close to rape. That Ana does not have all the facts is of no account.
And speaking of the series of unfortunate events that rained down on Ana, how is it that she doesn’t once suspect Christian’s involvement? He expressly threatened to just what he did. The timing, the inexplicable changes in her relationships and how people reacted to her, plus so many other conincidental misfortunes are just such compelling evidence of an intentional evil plot. Interestingly, Ray does know he was framed. He doesn’t just think circumstances made him look guilty. I think Ana should have at least had some suspicion of what was going on, even if she dismissed it. I know that her innocence and naivety is part of the story, but my suggestion is that she should have at least considered the possibility of a malevolent force. Otherwise she comes off as just stupid.
If we are headed for an hea, I hope to see Christian start to show some real concern when Ana is hurt or just plain miserable. So far, he wants and demands an affectation of love and desire from her, yet he is clearly smart enough to know coerced playacted affection has no value. I’d also like him to show some real interest in Ana’s wellbeing and happiness. And maybe even some regret for all he put her through. I’d like to see him somehow get some insight into the suffering he caused.
All in all, this is a very good story and I’m eager to read more.
| KerouacChick10 chapter 46 . 12/31/2017
I am lovin' this story dark yet exciting...I hope you'll have the time to continue this story that you've started...All the best
| Guest chapter 46 . 12/28/2017
We all miss you
| Ajal2007 chapter 46 . 12/28/2017
Can you give us more! Please! Don't leave us hanging!
| nattyzeenha chapter 46 . 12/15/2017
Omg where are you? I need this fanfic back!