Reviews for Harry Potter and the Deus Ex Machina |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not gonna lie... When Marius started to question Dumbledore, my blood was pumping so fast! The adrenaline of that part... Awesome.! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Most epic fanfiction of the decade. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is way to confusing to continue. I think I've tried three times. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story as it was well written, had an interesting plot and use of characters not often seen in the universe of HP fanfics. I especially liked your use of Regulus and the dynamics of the Black family. However I did not care for the ending which I find fell flat and I mean can you truely call it a sequel if all you upload is a prologue for then to abandon it. Sure you could claim that it isn't abandoned but I want to see it before I belive it. Anyway thank you for sharing the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this a good story? Unfortunately I'll never find out. First chapter of the story, and we have exposition piled upon more exposition. I managed to reach the point where there is an elaborate description of some cosmic force moving around and doing their thing, seemingly almost pointlessly. And that's the part where you got me to skim. If a reader skims then they are not really invested in the story any more, and very likely to stop reading. To be fair this reads pretty close to what professional writing should be like. And it might be a great story later on. Shame that it started off like this. I get the feeling that if you enacted this 'cosmic intervention fever dream' a few chapters later - after you got the reader hooked - I might have have powered through it and read ahead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was some amazingly good plot development! I don't understand why some of the reviews are so negative, when you really did make the combination of all these different characters and worlds work! There were only a few details at the end that I didn't quite get (what exactly were they all doing at Black Manor together for two months? Was this the period when they were preparing all the details go get Harry away from the Dursleys? That wasn't quite clear to me.) However, on the whole, I found the story quite gripping. You got the right balance between action and magic theory, and accurately built connections between characters and let Regulus and Sirius evolve and grow. And whatever other reviewers might have said, all the different universes you combined were linked together in a way that really makes the story stick together, and your story was amazing fun to read. So many fanfics have been written on Harry Potter that it's hard to find something innovative. Having that innovative idea and then also writing well is almost unheard of. Bravo, you managed both and had me loving it from start to end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a wonderful, if not sometimes confusing, story. I have to admit that as hard as I tried not to, I couldn't stop seeing Regulus as Tom Hiddleston's Loki and Sirius as Chris Hemsworth's Thor. Even when I read the description of what Sirius was supposed to look like my brain just refused to let me see him that way. I think it made Sirius all that more funny. I'm looking forward to starting the sequel. |
![]() ![]() Jesus Christ that was so complex. It was definitely much more than a Harry Potter fanfiction. Every excerpt had a purpose later down the line. It was like a spiderweb. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() heartwarming |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sucha sweet ending. and a great reunion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! That was a ride! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Looks fun;let’s go |