Reviews for Harry Potter and the Deus Ex Machina
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 18 . 7/23/2020
nice chapter. i enjoyed it a lot. HARRY POTTER is finally free. i'm very happy. one of my greatest regrets about the HARRY POTTER series is J. K. ROWLING essentially allowing the DURSLEYS to get away with child abuse scot free & not sending them to prison. so HARRY never gets to see his childhood tormentors answer for their crimes , nor does the readers / audience get to see the DURSLEY'S pay for tormenting a child , so every time the readers remember the situation , we can't even comfort ourselves & say they are in prison. outstanding work on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 17 . 7/23/2020
i'm deeply impressed. MARIUS is really cool. i won't shed a single tear for the DURSLEYS , because although HARRY POTTER was forced on them , they didn't have to deliberately make him miserable & abuse him. there is a special circle in HELL for child abuser's. there is a reason why people have the saying PICK ON SOMEONE YOUR OWN SIZE. i feel sorry for the M. I. 6. people who had to watch all the abuse take place & not stop it. it must have hurt a lot. this chapter was fascinating. you did great work on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 16 . 7/22/2020
humans are often very complex. sometimes one of the most painful part of being human is love , loving someone despite them hurting you or someone failing to help you when you need it because of them being human. brilliant chapter. it was touching. you did a terrific just on this chapter. way to go.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 15 . 7/22/2020
i'm having the feels man , i'm having the feels . astounding chapter. i'm enjoying it. you know it's easy to HATE [ HATE is sadly an easy emotion for humans to feel ] , but it's hard to be understanding & to forgive. you did an AMAZING job on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 14 . 7/22/2020
go MARIUS. you rock. i have been waiting for that & its glorious. i absolutely love this chapter. i don't know why J. K. ROWLING didn't include awesome Squibs like MARIUS in the books , instead of hateful , useless Squibs like Argus Filch & ARABELLA FIGG. its a lot of wasted opportunities. outstanding job on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 13 . 7/22/2020
fantastic chapter. good work on this chapter. i agree that DUMBLEDORE is a shady two face bastard , that you can't trust , he's also a lot of time even worse than VOLDEMORT. DUMBLEDORE does things like not punishing SIRIUS when his prank could have killed SEVERUS SNAPE or forcing PETUNEY to take in a baby HARRY who he at least suspects she dislikes & might treat badly , not check on him at all in 10 years except for a CRAZY CAT LADY NEIGHBOR , kept sending HARRY POTTER back to that house no matter how HARRY tried to tell him that his relatives hate MAGIC & don't treat him right , not doing his job as the SUPREME MUGWUMP & CHIEF WARLOCK by insisting the DEATH EATERS [ who are WAR CRIMINALS ] use Veritaserum at their trials , you would think DUMBLEDORE would at try to use his fame & political positions to do something useful , allowing bullying to run rampant in HOGWARTS for basically all of HARRY POTTER school years , setting a trap in a school with hundreds of children for VOLDEMORT & any person who wants it with a [ probably fake ] Philosopher's Stone. not to mention all the other crap DUMBLEDORE did in the books & movies. you have to remember that at least in the first four books & movies that DUMBLEDORE is not your average powerless magical citizen , he's powerful both politically & magically.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 12 . 7/22/2020
wow. very interesting chapter. SIRIUS is an UNSPEAKABLE , that's new. i suppose i should have seen it coming because he was looking at CROAKER at the trial. nice job on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 11 . 7/21/2020
this chapter was touching. great work with this chapter. its was very nice. i like the name of the chapter. REGULUS & SIRIUS reunion was heartwarming. i'm happy with this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 10 . 7/21/2020
this chapter is marvelous. i loved every single word of it. it's a whole new way to write time travel. congratulations on accomplishing something like that . you did a spectacular job or this chapter. you were correct when you said in the beginning of this story , that your ideas for this story were crazy. i'm amazed.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 9 . 7/21/2020
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, this chapter is EPIC. i symptomize with SIRIUS. i'm MIND BLOWN. i'm really enjoying this story. you did an AMAZING job on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 8 . 7/21/2020
this chapter is truly MAGNIFICENT. i'm really enjoying it. MARIUS is AWESOME. he's been preparing for this day for 7 years now. everyone's hard work is paying off. its going beautifully. excellent work on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 7 . 7/21/2020
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. talk about BAIT & SWITCH. this chapter was very interesting. great job with this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 6 . 7/21/2020
this is completely brilliant. i love it. i know that SIRIUS would end up in AZKABAN but this is a fresh take on everything else. i'm impressed. nice work on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 5 . 7/20/2020
awesome chapter. it is fascinating to read. the name of this chapter is spot on. nice work with everything in this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 4 . 7/20/2020
REGULUS is an ass kicking scholar. that's really cool. this chapter was exciting. REGULUS is very brave to taunt VOLDEMORT , because i'm sure he knows that VOLDEMORT has a hair trigger temper , so REGULUS is really lucky to be alive. great job on this chapter.
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