Reviews for Harry Potter and the Deus Ex Machina
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 15 . 7/22/2020
i'm having the feels man , i'm having the feels . astounding chapter. i'm enjoying it. you know it's easy to HATE [ HATE is sadly an easy emotion for humans to feel ] , but it's hard to be understanding & to forgive. you did an AMAZING job on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 14 . 7/22/2020
go MARIUS. you rock. i have been waiting for that & its glorious. i absolutely love this chapter. i don't know why J. K. ROWLING didn't include awesome Squibs like MARIUS in the books , instead of hateful , useless Squibs like Argus Filch & ARABELLA FIGG. its a lot of wasted opportunities. outstanding job on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 13 . 7/22/2020
fantastic chapter. good work on this chapter. i agree that DUMBLEDORE is a shady two face bastard , that you can't trust , he's also a lot of time even worse than VOLDEMORT. DUMBLEDORE does things like not punishing SIRIUS when his prank could have killed SEVERUS SNAPE or forcing PETUNEY to take in a baby HARRY who he at least suspects she dislikes & might treat badly , not check on him at all in 10 years except for a CRAZY CAT LADY NEIGHBOR , kept sending HARRY POTTER back to that house no matter how HARRY tried to tell him that his relatives hate MAGIC & don't treat him right , not doing his job as the SUPREME MUGWUMP & CHIEF WARLOCK by insisting the DEATH EATERS [ who are WAR CRIMINALS ] use Veritaserum at their trials , you would think DUMBLEDORE would at try to use his fame & political positions to do something useful , allowing bullying to run rampant in HOGWARTS for basically all of HARRY POTTER school years , setting a trap in a school with hundreds of children for VOLDEMORT & any person who wants it with a [ probably fake ] Philosopher's Stone. not to mention all the other crap DUMBLEDORE did in the books & movies. you have to remember that at least in the first four books & movies that DUMBLEDORE is not your average powerless magical citizen , he's powerful both politically & magically.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 12 . 7/22/2020
wow. very interesting chapter. SIRIUS is an UNSPEAKABLE , that's new. i suppose i should have seen it coming because he was looking at CROAKER at the trial. nice job on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 11 . 7/21/2020
this chapter was touching. great work with this chapter. its was very nice. i like the name of the chapter. REGULUS & SIRIUS reunion was heartwarming. i'm happy with this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 10 . 7/21/2020
this chapter is marvelous. i loved every single word of it. it's a whole new way to write time travel. congratulations on accomplishing something like that . you did a spectacular job or this chapter. you were correct when you said in the beginning of this story , that your ideas for this story were crazy. i'm amazed.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 9 . 7/21/2020
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, this chapter is EPIC. i symptomize with SIRIUS. i'm MIND BLOWN. i'm really enjoying this story. you did an AMAZING job on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 8 . 7/21/2020
this chapter is truly MAGNIFICENT. i'm really enjoying it. MARIUS is AWESOME. he's been preparing for this day for 7 years now. everyone's hard work is paying off. its going beautifully. excellent work on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 7 . 7/21/2020
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. talk about BAIT & SWITCH. this chapter was very interesting. great job with this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 6 . 7/21/2020
this is completely brilliant. i love it. i know that SIRIUS would end up in AZKABAN but this is a fresh take on everything else. i'm impressed. nice work on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 5 . 7/20/2020
awesome chapter. it is fascinating to read. the name of this chapter is spot on. nice work with everything in this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 4 . 7/20/2020
REGULUS is an ass kicking scholar. that's really cool. this chapter was exciting. REGULUS is very brave to taunt VOLDEMORT , because i'm sure he knows that VOLDEMORT has a hair trigger temper , so REGULUS is really lucky to be alive. great job on this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 3 . 7/20/2020
outstanding chapter. i like the mortal danger portkey idea. besides i can imagine everyone's expression to the situation. it must have been hilariously funny. nice work on this chapter REGULAS is a snark PRINCE. its glorious. nice work with this chapter.
Butterfly Wings Chaos Theory chapter 2 . 7/20/2020
this is very interesting. i enjoyed it. good work on this one.
Rossitis chapter 3 . 7/9/2020
How does Ted have no Idea who Raphael is? He’s a Muggle-Born ffs.
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