Reviews for The Albatross
MilleniumHeart323 chapter 5 . 9/11/2009
col story! loved it D
KhaosKitty chapter 5 . 4/20/2008
...Cor blimey. O.O Is that the end? Talk about suspense!

To be honest, I wanted to know whether Ryou ever stood up to Bakura, or got rid of him, and how Yugi was with Yami.

But even so, that was a good place to stop it, and I'm pretty damn AMAZED!

You kept this fic true to the dub - which is made for children - but you managed to show how truly dark the story is, which is rare. I'm going to use this fic as proof to my mate that YuGiOh IS serious!

Incredible.

-MDS
KhaosKitty chapter 4 . 4/20/2008
WOAH...

That is BRILLIANT. O.O

I could sense the Ryou x Yugi shonen-ai in that,

and I actually liked it! (I'm usually totally Ryou x Bakura)

I hope Yugi really is okay, and I wonder what Ryou did to get dirt under his nails! The big bad Bakura...
KhaosKitty chapter 3 . 4/19/2008
Shit, it's so late! O.o;;

But this fic is AWESOME!

I love it...

Shall continue in the morning!
KhaosKitty chapter 2 . 4/19/2008
Ooh, this is getting god!

I have to sleep now, I'll read the rest tomorrow.

(If I have time between homework and my own fanfic.
KhaosKitty chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
This is... brilliant. O.O

Reminds me somewhat of my fic Vicious Cycle, only yours is a lot better.

I must continue reading, for Ryous sake.
Muria chapter 5 . 3/7/2008
Oh... Poor Ryou! This is so... touching, really. It's powerful, and I think it stays fairly in-character with believable events...

I want to hug Ryou... And steal him away from Bakura... :( You didn't put much violence in here, but what you did put was very effective. And tasteful.

I didn't see any shonen ai hints. For me, that's a good thing, because I really don't like it. This just seems like friendship and villain/victim.

:)
Sour Schuyler chapter 3 . 9/20/2005
Aw, poor Yug'. Loved the use of episode dialogue, but how you didn't use all of it.
Sour Schuyler chapter 2 . 9/20/2005
I love this story so much, I'm rereading it. I liked this chapter, how you showed the contrast between Yugi and Ryou. Yugi barely knows anything about his spirit at all. The ending to this chapter was great.
Minkira chapter 5 . 7/12/2005
Your stories some how seem very pointless but love them.
Sour Schuyler chapter 5 . 11/26/2003
...Omigod...Poor Ryou... I never actually thought about Ryou's regrets on killing Pegasus before. Wow...
Sour Schuyler chapter 4 . 11/26/2003
Yeah, this is shounen-ai. I think so, anyway. So, um, it's good! _ I liked this chappie too! But I can't wait to see more of Bakura! . YAMI Bakura that is. *smirks*
Sour Schuyler chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
This is great. I really like eat, and this is only the first chapter! _ You might want to do stuff on Malik, too. _
Mercedes no Inuarai chapter 5 . 11/3/2003
Very appropriate choice of poem, too. The Ring is definately an "albatross." .

Freaky... I still wonder to this day... where IS Bakura keeping the Eye? O.o

Good fic.
Mercedes no Inuarai chapter 4 . 11/3/2003
I think you'd have to look DAMN hard to find shonen ai in this. Your choice of wording is a little better than your beta's, though I wouldn't call either Yugi or Bakura "manly." *L* They're two friends with a secret that only they can understand and that brings a different meaning to their friendship, but it doesn't make it romantic.

I like this fic because everyone's in character. Bakura isn't a complete wet noodle and Yugi has backbone. Yay!
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