Reviews for The Albatross
MilleniumHeart323 chapter 5 . 9/11/2009
col story! loved it D
KhaosKitty chapter 5 . 4/20/2008
...Cor blimey. O.O Is that the end? Talk about suspense!

To be honest, I wanted to know whether Ryou ever stood up to Bakura, or got rid of him, and how Yugi was with Yami.

But even so, that was a good place to stop it, and I'm pretty damn AMAZED!

You kept this fic true to the dub - which is made for children - but you managed to show how truly dark the story is, which is rare. I'm going to use this fic as proof to my mate that YuGiOh IS serious!


KhaosKitty chapter 4 . 4/20/2008


I could sense the Ryou x Yugi shonen-ai in that,

and I actually liked it! (I'm usually totally Ryou x Bakura)

I hope Yugi really is okay, and I wonder what Ryou did to get dirt under his nails! The big bad Bakura...
KhaosKitty chapter 3 . 4/19/2008
Shit, it's so late! O.o;;

But this fic is AWESOME!

I love it...

Shall continue in the morning!
KhaosKitty chapter 2 . 4/19/2008
Ooh, this is getting god!

I have to sleep now, I'll read the rest tomorrow.

(If I have time between homework and my own fanfic.
KhaosKitty chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
This is... brilliant. O.O

Reminds me somewhat of my fic Vicious Cycle, only yours is a lot better.

I must continue reading, for Ryous sake.
Muria chapter 5 . 3/7/2008
Oh... Poor Ryou! This is so... touching, really. It's powerful, and I think it stays fairly in-character with believable events...

I want to hug Ryou... And steal him away from Bakura... :( You didn't put much violence in here, but what you did put was very effective. And tasteful.

I didn't see any shonen ai hints. For me, that's a good thing, because I really don't like it. This just seems like friendship and villain/victim.

Sour Schuyler chapter 3 . 9/20/2005
Aw, poor Yug'. Loved the use of episode dialogue, but how you didn't use all of it.
Sour Schuyler chapter 2 . 9/20/2005
I love this story so much, I'm rereading it. I liked this chapter, how you showed the contrast between Yugi and Ryou. Yugi barely knows anything about his spirit at all. The ending to this chapter was great.
Minkira chapter 5 . 7/12/2005
Your stories some how seem very pointless but love them.
Sour Schuyler chapter 5 . 11/26/2003
...Omigod...Poor Ryou... I never actually thought about Ryou's regrets on killing Pegasus before. Wow...
Sour Schuyler chapter 4 . 11/26/2003
Yeah, this is shounen-ai. I think so, anyway. So, um, it's good! _ I liked this chappie too! But I can't wait to see more of Bakura! . YAMI Bakura that is. *smirks*
Sour Schuyler chapter 1 . 11/26/2003
This is great. I really like eat, and this is only the first chapter! _ You might want to do stuff on Malik, too. _
Mercedes no Inuarai chapter 5 . 11/3/2003
Very appropriate choice of poem, too. The Ring is definately an "albatross." .

Freaky... I still wonder to this day... where IS Bakura keeping the Eye? O.o

Good fic.
Mercedes no Inuarai chapter 4 . 11/3/2003
I think you'd have to look DAMN hard to find shonen ai in this. Your choice of wording is a little better than your beta's, though I wouldn't call either Yugi or Bakura "manly." *L* They're two friends with a secret that only they can understand and that brings a different meaning to their friendship, but it doesn't make it romantic.

I like this fic because everyone's in character. Bakura isn't a complete wet noodle and Yugi has backbone. Yay!
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