|Reviews for Phantoms Jump|
| Charly520 chapter 3 . 1/3
This is much better writing then the original, great job!
| rebelturtle9-1-3 chapter 4 . 11/30/2016
/JxqaWSsdX4g Darth Vader scream"NOOOOOOOO!". I'm sad to see this story go. maybe in my spare time of writing my own fanfics I can adopt this one, if you'll let me. I was impressed with what was here. here's a tip for your future fanfics. this mlp song always keeps my spirits high when I come to a bit of a roadblock with my writing.(link is above) also there's this channel that helps lend tips and cures for writers block(and things of that nature). it's called FAST screenplay(on YouTube)
| Lady Merp chapter 4 . 9/14/2013
Stuff happens i really live this story and I hope who ever adopts it lives up to your expectations and standards!
| little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 4 . 9/9/2013
Awe! *pouts* it's such a good story! *sigh* you're still an awesome author. :).
| Sparky chapter 4 . 9/9/2013
Noooo! Riqis, don't leave us! You-this is not good...but alas, if you cannot come up with ideas, who is to make you write?
This is VFR, although I don't have access to my account, I still love you! Platonically of course
| Assasin8 chapter 4 . 9/8/2013
Well, i guess it was good while of lasted. I'm sad to see you let this story go, but we understand. Good luck with whatever else you try in the future...
| Irrelevant86 chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
please write more!
| Auburn chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
I liked the original so i think im gonna like this one even more! Please kepp writing! Or typing... :)
| Peanut Butter Rules chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
I loved it! This is awesomely written. I can't wait till the next update! Please update soon!
| SomeAroNerd chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Oh my god, another review? This is supposed to be a rare occurence! Curse you and your awesome writing skills! Why must you be so epic that I am compelled to write yet another- arg! Never mind, update.
*A floating skull, next to the half demoness, emits a few clicks and chirps*
*The girl growls, gritting her teeth*
I mean, update PLEASE. Curse my therapist for saying I need to be more polite! If she wasn't my best friend I would so smite her!
*The skull clicks again, causing the pixie to blush*
S-shut up! And bring me some more Jelly Beans!
| Assasin8 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
This story has the potential to be really amazing! I really hope you plan to update regularly...
| supaherolena02 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
This is AWESOME! Plz I wanna see more! Update soon :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
| Aiedail chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Awww come on you serosly can't leve me with a chiffhanger :C *-*
| ChopSuzi chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Yay! I was helpful! :D
| zoeshade chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
It's perfect or chapter one and I like the cliffhanger maybe let them get hurt or something.