Reviews for Ex-Prince of Konoha, New King of Deviluke
dracohalo117 chapter 11 . 8/23
A most wonderful update, I find it quite enjoyable thus far.

KnowPein chapter 11 . 8/20
Nice story...

update soon
ExplodingKnuckler chapter 1 . 8/13
Nice Start :)
AJGuardian chapter 11 . 8/10
DannyPhantom619 chapter 3 . 8/10
I hope for Naruto to do the Hiraishin. That seal was one of the most epic shit in the Naruto anime, so I hope that you give Naruto that skill in this crossover fanfiction.
DannyPhantom619 chapter 11 . 8/10
Everytime I watch or read fanfiction about the first&second season of To Love-Ru it always leaves me with a WHAT THE F-UCK expression.
Though Rito sometimes pisses me off...mostly due because of how weak he is.
insanemaelstorm chapter 11 . 8/10
Nice chapter. Was eagerly waiting for an update. Your portrayed of lala's innocence and her ability to win anyone over was done very well. It made me like her as a character even more. Loved how naruto was scared of how his mother would react. Also liked the scenes with yami. And also how easy flowing and overall ease to read the chapter was. Reading it made me remember the scenes in manga in which this happened and the manga had visual aid to be as good as your chapter. Looking forward to more
Rezuvious chapter 11 . 8/10
Markus-Antonius chapter 11 . 8/9
Always happy to see you update anything!
ImayHaveaName chapter 11 . 8/9
Honestly a Halloween update works for me. You've kept this story very light hearted and fun so it's something nice to break the cycle of seriousness I normally read. To be perfectly honest I'm kinda going crazy with where you left off in New Devil. I wanna read Hunting or Bust but I'm struggling to get into RWBY, I know it's a common complaint, but the animation style is just really difficult for me to get around. This was a nice chapter though.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/9
Mdhunter here. Great chapter and awesome story so far! Good job! Thank you for all your work and effort that you put into this story! It is appreciated greatly! Please do continue soon! Really looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks again, and may you have a wonderful year!
Sharkdude5 chapter 11 . 8/9
Great Chapter!
Mingyu chapter 11 . 8/9
Well, that's one way to calm down a raging Kushina. Lala reached new levels of oblivious there...still funny.
ScreamingMidgit chapter 11 . 8/9
"Because this is the only goofy story he writes and the boss wants to focus on the more serious stuff!"

For a second there I thought Naruto had clones before I realized he was just subtly breaking the fourth wall. Good job on that by the way. Also, October is the next update then? Crap. Oh well, we have all the other stories to hold us over until then.

And regarding off topic things...

It looks like Winter took all the boobage in the family, don't call Uncle Qrow short (I want to see someone do that just to see what happens), and most importantly...

fairy tail dragon slayer chapter 11 . 8/9
Actually, Yami is about 22 years old
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