Reviews for Path of the Sword
Lia chapter 10 . 7/14/2015
This is beautiful. 'Nuf said. XD
kokoronagomu chapter 10 . 1/24/2015
that was extremely funny and silly. i saw a video where a couple men arranged for themselves to have electrodes placed on their stomachs to cause contractions simulating actual labor contractions while their pregnant wives watched, it was also amusing. xD
i have one thing that bugged me though. i've given birth twice and was present at a few more, the woman's body determines when to push, like involuntary spasms are nearly impossible to resist so i take exception to watching or reading things where the midwife/doctor/whatever tells the mother to push... lol BBC has a tv series about midwives where they ALWAYS tell the woman to push, i want to slap them every time. ;p
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 10 . 8/11/2009
Lmfao! I wish it would! XD Awesome job man!

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 9 . 8/11/2009
YAY Go KENSHIN! XD Who would of know the boy.. er girl.. could swear. Lol

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 8 . 8/10/2009
AWW! I thought Saito would find out. Now THAT would of been funny. Kenshin would of never lived it down! XD Lmfao

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 7 . 8/10/2009
Oh noes that was close! O Lol. Snappy Kenshin is fun to tease.

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 6 . 8/10/2009
Lmfao. Epic XD Now what ways his Kenshin gonna get payback to Kaoru? /) *suggestive* Lol. XD *perv*

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 5 . 8/10/2009
Aww.. Poor Oro chan. But Im sorry.. Lmfao. I swear idk if Im reading in btw the lines or am just crazy. Totally sounded suggestive! Lol:

"No longer did he feel the urge to flirt with his best friend, and when Kaoru was not there to help, he was quick to offer to help Kenshin get dressed in the morning, heat the redhead’s bath, and even help with the laundry. For some reason, despite his physiological change, Kenshin never minded if Sanosuke saw him undressed. Yahiko, he would certainly never allow in the room, and Kaoru only because they were married. There was no rational reason, but Kenshin tolerated Sanosuke’s presence without complaint."

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 4 . 8/10/2009
Lmfao. Oh BOY that was funny!

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 3 . 8/10/2009
Lmfao. Poor poor Kenshin and Kaoru.

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 2 . 8/10/2009
Lmfao. Nice XD

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
D'aw that was so cute. XD The only thing that bugged me is that Kenshin called her Kamiya. ISnt she a Himra now _~

Ari chan
Bloodsong chapter 10 . 8/5/2009
*wipes eyes*

Oh, man. As a mother of two not much bigger then Kenshin, I can so totally sympathize. Although I didn't swear in the delivery room. _

This was very well done. I loved the juxtaposition and...and...and now I realize you've fed a plot bunny I had been trying very hard to ignore. Ah well. I'm adding this to my favorite list.
Raven Wolfmoon chapter 2 . 5/29/2009
Umm...well, I didn't see that one coming... I'm not sure I like it, sorry...ehehe...

Good luck!
Raven Wolfmoon chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Ooh excellent so far! Haha pretty good cannon (canon?) and overall really awesome! I enjoyed this line immensely:

"Kenshin...glared at the door for all he was worth. The door was not impressed."


And Megumi telling Kaoru about pregnancy? Love your word choice there from Kaoru's perspective. Hilarious and wonderful!
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