|Reviews for Knight of the Void|
| NexusRider161 chapter 11 . 7/30
I've been reading the Spacebattles version of this story and I must say, I quite like the idea of Mott being something other than a traitorous, rapey rat bastard. This is officially my favorite Mott.
| EiNyx chapter 12 . 6/19
It feels like so little has happened with how long this story is. It's 12 chapters and nearly 110K words in and we've technically just wrapped up the Mott arc. What impact has Alex had since he arrived in this world? He's been trained by some of (all?) the 4 Heavenly Knights for some time and has the elemental spirits inside him. His parents are the most powerful warriors in his world. Not to mention they are King and Queen. Yet he's easily cowed when threated with war? A Heavenly Knight alone could level the entire country of Halkeginia. He's played as a fool from Count Mott and he's unable to exert any pressure as a Prince or a Warrior to save Siesta? What has he accomplished so far? Nothing notable at all.
| 7137 chapter 12 . 5/11
Glad you're keeping Siesta after all. She's probably my favorite female character of Familiar of Zero
| Greatazuredragon chapter 7 . 3/30
Awesome story so far, good work.
| Greatazuredragon chapter 4 . 3/30
Hahaha awesome work so far, well done.
| libertax chapter 12 . 3/29
I like it! Thanks for the chapter!
| Sebaspe chapter 3 . 3/18
This is awesome
| Karharot chapter 12 . 3/7
Nice story :) I'm looking forward to Louise meeting Elemental Spirits, or maybe even learning a bit more about the mother she was compared to :)
BTW - I don't know how much you are interested in keeping your story in canon with MGQ events that were revealed only after you already published several chapters but if you do care about such details then you may want to revise bits of Chapter 1 (more specifically the line "the four hundred year old fox" since Tamamo is way older than that) and Chapter 4 (again about Tamamo this time thinking on "having only become a mother herself relatively recently." while according to the third MGQ she was most likely the progenitor of the entire Kitsune race).
| knightoblivion chapter 12 . 2/28
Alright. I'm not going to say it's good, but this story IS fun. Favorite parts were definitely Kirche trying and failing miserably to seduce Alexander. Alexander himself is a fun person, exibiting some of the worst and best traits of his parents. The fight scenes are tight, not exciting but the stakes for them haven't been high so I forgive them.
Worried who is going to be sent through the portal. Tamano is the logical choice, being smart, powerful and versatile. It sort of feels like Luka will be the one sent and given some plottonium to use after finding Alexander. Then again, any heavenly knight class monster that goes through is going to be absurdly powerful to the point of being able to kick the crap out of countries singlehandedly. Wonder how you're going to resolve that once we reestablish contact with the monster world.
Or, we could say fuck it and dick around in FoZ world until you get bored.
| Lordgoth chapter 12 . 2/3
Nice, please keep updating.
| edboy4926 chapter 12 . 1/23
Keep on going
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/17
By making mott a realitively speaking good guy you have completely ruined your story
| Quelthias chapter 12 . 1/14
A bit wlow paced but wow for character development!
I abandon fanfics when a character shows unnatural ammounts of only one emotion (especially if they are in an insane depression like Shinji Ikari). For Alex to be convinced by Louise over time at a believable pace gives me hope for this fanfic.
Oh and please introduce Henrietta next!
| Quelthias chapter 11 . 1/14
I like this reasonable Count, although I would have preferred if he owes Kirche something for her pornography book.
| Quelthias chapter 10 . 1/13
I like serious Osmond, he does play the perverted old man trope but he really was far too leniant.
This chapter at least showed his true self.