Reviews for A Shot in the Dark |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like how he had the moment with bifur. So many writers tend to forget him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i enjoyed the somewhat peaceful characteristic of this chapter. its the calm before a storm |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great, great chapter! Especially I love the part about Fili's thoughts, I just adore those brothers and I also love how you describe the dwarves' ideas about Bilbo's strange behavior, so it was a double pleasure)) Thanks! I'm sure the next one will be terrific, considering what events happen there!)) can't wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. I never though that I would read something like this, and I'm so happy that I found it. It's only the second chapter, and already I love it. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy smokes this is a brilliant story! I love Bilbo! How he handles situations... and I forgot what else I was gonna say. Maybe his awesomeness and foreplanning and dealing. I love the dwarves personalities! In all the other stories, I've never read a dialog from Nori. I love Kili, Fili, and Thorin so far. You rock! |
![]() ![]() You got me hooked O.O moaaar |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh, they are INTERACTING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh please continue! This story is really good! I hope it doesn't end bad... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww. :$ I will dream of them tonight, they are too sweet for their good. :) |
![]() ![]() Uh, but if there is not a meeting with Radagast that means not knowing about the Necromancer/Sauron? |
![]() ![]() I cry for bilbo. This is such a fantastic story. I hope to see more chapters soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Bilbo missed the meeting with Elrond, Gandalf, Balin and Thorin? Or is that still coming up? Aha, sneaky burglar Bilbo defiling books! Looking forward to your next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() SOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! KEEP IT UP! I LOVE IT! :D :D :D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since I haven't reviewed since first chapter, I will just write everything in one review! I wanted to tell you it's one of best Hobbit fanfictions I've read. First chapters made me cry, because more than once I've imagined how would've it been if Bilbo, once again, meet his companions. And even if it would've hurt him to see Ori, Balin, Dwalin and others, it must've been the most painful for him to see Bofur, since they're good friends, Kili and Fili, but that's just kind of obvious, and of course Thorin. Everything is just in character, and I hope that Bilbo will do something, and that this will end differently, I mean with every one of them alive(well not orcs and wargs, but yeah). Can't wait to see more! |