| Reviews for A Shot in the Dark |
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   new Tonksie chapter 5 . 1/23/2013 Brilliant! I wondered how you will solve problem with trolls :) Hmm it looks like Bilbo is really going to change story. That's good that he is doing it with thought - it doesn't make him some super hero and it's believable :P Good work :P I wonder what he will do in Rivendel :D |
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/23/2013 Update soon |
| lacrima-tuja chapter 5 . 1/23/2013 "For all I know you could be as skilled in battle as an orc is at knitting" I howled with laughter. That was too good to be true! xD I kneel before you and your skill. |
| Grencle chapter 5 . 1/23/2013 Oh my! This was brilliant! As usual I loved it. I love your writing style and I really love how you portray Bilbo. I loved the scene with the trolls. I imagined how you'd go about it but my imagination was nowhere near as good as your story. He just walked up to them! Ingenius! And the Fili poisoned them! A very nice twist... Absolutely wonderful. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks for this one! xD |
| Redone chapter 5 . 1/23/2013 Ouch, evil Bilbo! But, the way I see it, the company is now aware that they have a poisoner among them, and one who is not afraid to use what he has. So, will they every be able to trust him completely? |
| Threeglinthawksinatrenchcoat chapter 5 . 1/23/2013 I like your knowledgeable Bilbo, I have to say. And Bilbo, you ARE brave. You sttod up to Azog to defend Thorin. You fought spiders. You sneaked around in Mirkwood to free 13 dwarves. You stole from a dragon. And you took part in the battle of five armies. |
| Polariss chapter 5 . 1/23/2013 *o* omg... I really love the way you are rewriting the story XDDDD LOL! I need to read more of this! Great job! :D |
| Valandhir chapter 5 . 1/23/2013 While I am not sure trolls can be poisoned, I like your solution of the problem. Well done indeed. Go Bilbo! I am really enjoying your story. |
| Netag Silverstar chapter 5 . 1/23/2013 The trolls! LOL! My goodness that was funny, they are worse then half wits! And I like both Bilbos clever answers and his plan, they were really good. I look forward to seeing more of it. Well done, best of luck and keep up the good work. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/22/2013 up date soon, i like this story and can't wait till the next chapter |
| Lithoniel chapter 4 . 1/22/2013 I love this story . Please keep writing and I'm looking forward to the next update! |
| WhiteFang72 chapter 4 . 1/22/2013 As usual, brilliant chapter! Please keep updating! |
| PurpleLightning12 chapter 4 . 1/22/2013 I love this idea! I ecspecially like how you've done Ori, Bofur, Bombur, and Dwalin. The way you've written Bilbo's personality is also incredible. I hope you update soon :) |
| Saphireanime chapter 4 . 1/22/2013 wow. there are no other words. this story is simply amazing. when i try to write something like this i find i get impatient but you have taken your time to make every sentence a wonderful gripping read. i love the respect and awe maybe Bilbo has received from most of the dwarves and i hope that Thorin accepts this time round too although i did like it when Thorin admitted he'd never been more wrong so i hope you can keep that scene or something similar. has Gandalf already figured out that Bilbo is from the future/past, whatever? i suppose Bilbo is planning on destroying the ring almost as soon as he recovers it. i look forward to the rest of the story so please update soon |
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/22/2013 up date, can't wait to read more |