I didn't see any typos, though that might be because I was absorbed in a most wonderful chapter, you have done such a good job! I liked seeing Dwalins point of view at the beginning, are you going to do more of that sort of thing in the future? This story is very very good, and I hope to see more of it soon.

Well done, best of luck and keep up the excellent work.

I just love how Dwalin and Bombur are getting "screen time". Back characters sometimes get lost, but you bring them out and make this story all the better. Some stories rush along and hurry "to the important parts" but really this is just lovely, to stop and "smell the roses". And Bilbo is just so EPIC!

"He noticed Gandalf had been watching him with that same look he used to (and eventually would again) give Meriadoc Brandybuck and Peregrin Took whenever they got too close to the fireworks." ROTFL! I just about died!
Well, thank you and keep updating! The one note I had is that Gandalf seems to have trusted Bilbo a little too easily. I think the point you were trying to make was that Gandalf realized that Bilbo was re-living his life, but if so he jumped to that conclusion a little too quickly.
Other than that, love the story and keep updating! Can't wait for the Trolls! :)

Good chapter. I'm glad Bilbo is bonding with the dwarfs. Can't wait to read more.

An excellent beginning!

Yes, I can already see things won't go perfectly for Bilbo especially with how suspicious he's acting so I have no doubts he will be an anti-Mary Sue.

I can't wait to see how you're going to fit all the changes in because some scenes are going to be fairly tricky.

Update soon please!

I have tears in my eyes. All those sad memories and Bilbos trying to prevent his friends from harm is heartbreaking.

Until now I don't see, that you wrote a MarySue. It is such a new plot, we should try and understand, that Bilbo wants to try to make the bad memories now better through his actions and the knowledge he has of the other characters.

This story will go on to my favorites and I believe you will someday get over 1000 reviews - this story is worth it.

great fic! I love the idea and the plot is going along so well:)
i can't wait to read the next chapter!

I love this. Why is the update not here yet? :lip wobbles:
Seriously. Can't. Wait. :3

Good god, it hurts waiting for an update!

I love the idea behind this and I cannot wait to read more!

This is such a cool idea! I wonder how Bilbo's relationships with everyone, especially Thorin, will change now that he's a different hobbit. Please update soon!

Loved the message he left. Like the way you write not to mention are developing this lovely plot.
I hope he doesn't tell anyone though. At least, not for a long while.

Well that's a very good start and I can't wait to read the rest

This is such a lovely story. While I despise Mary Sues, I still want all our wonderful dwarves to make it out alive.

I still believe Tolkein killing Fili and Kili was an oops. He should have found another way to make Dain the king. I hope that PJ would amend this. I mean the movie did not mention their kinship. Isn't crazy how much angst we carry for the death of our beloved fictional characters? Thorin is too awesome to die at the end of the Bo5

Wow. I have been waiting for someone to bring this concept into the fandom of the Hobbit. Thank you. You have done a great job so far and I'm really excited in seeing how this will pan out in the future chapters. Thanks for finally writing this and for the wonderful read so far. Looking forward to furture updates.