Reviews for A Shot in the Dark |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i'm so excited to see a time travel story! i'm very curious to see how this will turn out, and if bilbo can help stop the deaths of my fav dwarves. i wonder if he has any healing knowledge now? or will he be able to pack a better medical kit? i can't wait to read more and find out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so happy there is a fic like this being written! Please tell me it is definitely going to be AU! I really hate it when Fili, Kili and Thorin die. Also is there going to be a pairing? Not that the story needs one, I was just wondering. Keep up the good work! Muse |
![]() ![]() This is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehydhheyeyuudjjdiydyehh Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am very interested in how you go with this keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good and interesting story so far. Definitely continue it! Oh, and also one small typo: You spelled "Battle of the Five" and forgot to put in the "Armies" part. |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay now im a bit hooked on how the journeys going to go. and how bilbo deals with the ring and such. also looking to see how bilbos now devious mind can be put to use against the goblins, orcs, trolls, and the other nasty things he finds. |
![]() ![]() ![]() rxcuse me but i was wondering if i could perhapes do this kind of a fiction... only without the pairing (everyone to their own, i think thorin would come to care for bilbo as a member of their company and family...and the other weay around as well) anyway going to go ohn with this in a clear headed way, looking to see how this goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was actually thinking about doing something similar to this. I can't wait to see what you do, and I look forward to frequent updates! (hint hint wink wink :P) |
![]() ![]() ![]() My feels are acting up. Can't wait for an update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is brilliant! I love the emotion in this chapter, particularly - Fili and Kili's arrival almost brought me to tears, to say nothing of Bilbo. Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am in love with this plot and am eagerly waiting for the next chapter. You weite very well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story! I love time travel fics and this one seems well put together so far. The little injections of flashbacks and minor breakdowns are very tasteful and realistic. I cannot count how many time travel fics i've read where the main character is only surprised at seeing people and then move on without a hitch. I wish to see more of it, this story seems very cool :) please update as often as possible :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, it's a promising start i can't wait for the next chapter |