|Reviews for Eyes|
| bellajasp23 chapter 26 . 8/17
i love it love it here me
| SemiraBlake chapter 26 . 4/29/2014
Don't doubt your ability, I know this is LONG past that time you got the review but seriously. Anyone with hate to a story needs to SHUT UP and find one they like instead. I love this story. When I first started reading it, I wanted to scream from anxiety from not knowing why she was like that but then wanted to laugh and cry because I wrote a paragraph in class TODAY on how the black market SUCKS! You, ya lovely writer, took time from your life, the short time you have on this DAMNED world, to write this story. That person has a problem with such a twistedly awesome plot then THEY are the one as stupid as Misa and Matsuda. NOT YOU
| saikothegamer chapter 26 . 10/17/2013
I wanted to say that I loved your story overall, it was interesting to read and I cannot wait to start reading the sequel(which I probably will start reading tonight) and I hope that you write more because I enjoy your writingKai
Omg L is smexy!(I had to say that) :D
| scarletlovecharlie chapter 26 . 7/29/2013
Don't worry, I love your story and am keen for the next chapter. I know exactly how you feel at the moment. I have gotten hate as well and it really does put you down. But thats when you've just gotta get up and stab them in the eye and laugh telling them at how much THEY f*cked up instead of you. They can't be pissed at you for trying to entertain people. It's them who need help not you. Just ignore them, or send them a message or do what I did and write a chapter like this gibing an example and tell them to F-off.
| Cristikirtas chapter 26 . 6/28/2013
OMG this story was so freaking cool! I read in one day I was mesmerized! Cant wait to see what happens in the next book:) bye the way *major nosebleed* thanks to chapter 24 ;D
| BrokenDownLilAngel chapter 26 . 5/25/2013
I believe you did a wonderful job with this fanfiction! Yes L was a little off from how he is in the manga/anime, but that's perfectly okay. I mean how boring would it be if every L fanfic we ever read had L portrayed perfectly? I mean the way you portray characters is unique to you and you alone. Plus it's what makes your fanfic stand out from the rest! I truly loved this story and am excited to read the sequel.
| NonieBee chapter 26 . 5/21/2013
The story was beautiful! And whoever swnt the hate reviews needs to get a freaking life! Srsly your portrayal of L was brilliant! I must admit that i think you could have put more in there, maybe some dialoge between her and shinigamis.. i unno, BUT it was still awesome!
If you feel bad about it do a rewrite and publishe as a NEW story, have the same start and different ending, if you do make sure to fill it out! The whole concept of ur oc having shinigami eyes is epic, i think that you could have adressed iit more... What i do in my story is, i reread the last few chapters befor writing an neew one, it helps with concistancies and stuff. I must admit i havnt read the sequel yet but thats what im gonna do now.
As for the haters... Because you are writing for such a popolar anime you will have readers that have very strong opinions, i never had that oroblem (i write for gintama )
Oh and if any o those pooheads hate mail you again, feel free to message me :D my inbox is always open n.n
| NonieBee chapter 18 . 5/21/2013
Just wanna say i see a few auto correct mistakes.. i hate thise damn things, the mistakes that spellcheck cant find D: i LIVE on spellcheck!
Anyhoo LxK soo cuuute! I must admit this is the first multichapter LxOc fic iv read but i recon its probly one of the best :D
| NonieBee chapter 17 . 5/21/2013
I think you need to go through and reread your work.. there are alot of inconcistancies, originally you said 2008 and now 2004... There are a few other things as well. The story on the otherhand is brilliant, tbough i think it seems a little rushed, like you skipped over stuff or something, maybe its just me wishing that it went forever n.n anyhoo i gonna read more now!
| NonieBee chapter 10 . 5/21/2013
Haha you write how you talk, i do that too except instead of "ya" my silly thing is "gonna" as in "going to" and "wanna" as in want to
I love your little auther notes they make me smile! :D
| NonieBee chapter 8 . 5/21/2013
So she can hear ryuk? O.o interesting, only ppl who have touched the deathnote can see him usually :P sorry ill try to not spam you with a million reviews x.x
*once again continues to read*
| NonieBee chapter 5 . 5/21/2013
I think you have writen L really well :D i love him he is perfect!
is a douche! :D
| NonieBee chapter 4 . 5/21/2013
Hmm in truth i think that L would have used an alius liiike riuzaki, or hideki ryuga (sorry bout spelling) i think he would still be suspicious of her.
But thats just my opinion :p *continues to read*
| NonieBee chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
Hey i just noticed part way through that you wrote them instead of thumb its a bit after when she was cpunting her age :D normaly i would ignore minor mistakes like that but you asked for us to point them out.
So far story is reaallly interesting, cant wait to see what happens next *continues to read*
| Deception is Decepticon chapter 26 . 5/10/2013
Tis alright, every author and experienced writer has had a fair share of these types of reviews...but I don't see what you are getting so worked up about. Sure, your story recieved a review upon which the truth was revealed to you, everything WAS out of place and different to the story line, but that simply calls for your attention, all you had to do instead of writing your heart out on this AN was go back, re-read your story, research your character (I believe there is a wonderful new complilation of informantion on Death Note Wikia) and get a BETA reader.
Every willing BETA reader is out there waiting for you to contact them with your concerns, and even if you have no concerns have another person just read it over. Its completely anonymous, so the chances of you giving your story to a friend is completely unlikely.
Yes, there has been the ugly truth in the words of one reviewer, but they have been the kindest any reviewer could have been to you, they told you that there was something in this story that wasn't right, all you had to do was take it in step and fix it.
No writer enjoys it, I must admit, but toughen up. We all suffer from it, but we all gain experience from it and learn to please the audience more.