|Reviews for Overkill|
| the stargate time traveller chapter 10 . 3/8
She's got a point about the Prophets, and it wouldn't surprise me if Ro Laren - wonderful person who left the sheep for the right reasons for a worthier cause - had also abandoned the prophets. And Kira's right about Winn. She was always more interested in plotting for power, and when she had it she would plot for more.
| the stargate time traveller chapter 9 . 3/8
| the stargate time traveller chapter 6 . 3/8
Makes sense the Klingons would've abandoned the Mind Sifter - we never heard about it again, so nice take on it.
The Cardassians are scum.
| the stargate time traveller chapter 4 . 3/8
I can understand why Sito believes she's being punished. i always thought Locarno was a sleaze bag who didn't give a damn about his friends despite his manner, but Sito and Wesley certainly had a clear conscience. Not sure about the other one.
I thought the Enterprise D was destroyed otherwise Worf wouldn't be on the station.
| the stargate time traveller chapter 1 . 3/8
"I'm sick of war. My people need peace." Guess you can't trust Cardassians, even Damar and Garak had proven a bit…..iffy from time to time. I'm glad Sito managed to survive, just barely.
| LADYMALLARD chapter 24 . 2/27
Wow, what a chapter...Just when things were going so right, that word had to be uttered and cause poor Sito to go berzerk and take Worf's phaser and fire it...I hope it didn't hit anyone. That dastardly Pah Wraith, I hope that Yeshua will find out about it and punish it for the damage it has done. What will happen next in this exciting story? I will be on pins and needles to find out...Till next time.
| indissippi chapter 3 . 2/17
This could have been good but I had to stop reading because of the Christian crap, seriously annoying.
| LADYMALLARD chapter 23 . 1/30
This was a terrific chapter with the mystery of who saved Sito from those demon Cardassians solved, I loved that it was Odo, (he's always been my favorite character from Deep Space 9) using his shape shifting ability to liberate the poor suffering girl. I love that he confessed to save her from more anguish added to the pain, due to her injuries. I think it was clever of The God creature to gain Natalya's trust, by proving his powers and I do wonder what kind of punishment That God creature will dish out now that he's stopped the Federation from destroying the Cardassian planet. I anxiously look forward to the next chapter to see what will happen...till next time.
| LADYMALLARD chapter 22 . 1/11
Another intriguing chapter, that ghostly terror is more pain that poor Sito has to endure, but what will happen next? Will seeing Tok be a comfort for her and will he be able to keep up the deception of being the Tok she insists saved her? What will the Demon try next? I anxiously await the next chapter in this amazing story, to find out...till next time.
| AirbusA380rocks chapter 21 . 12/22/2013
I started to read this story this morning and didn't stop until this chapter.
It is a good story about Sito and an alternative to the end of "lower desks"
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| LADYMALLARD chapter 21 . 12/17/2013
Quite a chapter, what's up with Quark's mother giving him such an expensive gift to give Sito?
Knowing he would pass it along to avoid being disinherited, I'm wondering if she knew it would cause such a reaction...
I am wondering also, is seeing herself as a Cardassian part of the residual conditions from the mind shifter or does it have something to do with the earring?
What will happen next, will she continue to hallucinate unless she removes the earring?
I can't wait for the next chapter to find out if she continues to wear the earring or not and if the hallucinations are due to it, or the lesion on her brain...
I just have to wait and see of course, great job...till next time.
| stormguard chapter 21 . 12/16/2013
Another good chapter Susan.
Just waiting on my next updated chapter i sent you.
| stormguard chapter 20 . 12/2/2013
Great read. Sorry for late review havent been to well of late
| LADYMALLARD chapter 20 . 11/27/2013
This was an interesting and exciting chapter, with Silto's God preparing to punish the Cardassians. I loved that Quark dished out his own unique brand of punishment to Dukat and his minions and that Sito will be trying to return to normality with the help of Dr. Crusher. I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter to see how things proceed...till next time.
| LADYMALLARD chapter 19 . 11/10/2013
Wow, what a chapter, just when she was begining to feel better, poor Sito had such an adverse reaction to a Bajoran food with out knowing why, but with the help of a Vulcan mind meld and reliving a horrible memory, she at lest will know why she had that reaction. It's good that little by little they are uncovering the past. I hope that as they get rid of these terrible memories Sito will continue to recover from all that has happened to her. What will they uncover next and will it help to advance her recovery, I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter to see what will happen...till next time.