Reviews for The Humanity Factor
Supper Hot Turk chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Yet another fantastic story! You really are a great writer.
DakotaCelt chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Nice job with a good balance between heartache and humor.
jada951 chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
A real challenge to realistically write this type of rescue and aftermath.
A challenge that is well met in this story!
I think the snarkiness back and forth between the guys, is probably
realistic too, as rescue workers try to cope with the unexpected, dangerous, scary part of the job.

And Jenny being on the bus - and almost missed! Roy can be as miffed as he
wants, if it wasn't for Johnny, I doubt they could have made it back in time to get her out alive (shock, hurt, exposed to the elements.)

As a parent I can understand Roy's gut reaction, but his jealousy is a bit tough to take. And Johnny really wasn't trying for that praise either.

tough trust exercises too. but they came thru as the champions and heroes that they are.

Gotta say, I love the dog, Fred.
:)
Bamboozlepig chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Very poignant, with the right touches of humor. Excellent read!
GageDeSotoFan chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Good one, really enjoyed this story. Thanks for the fun.
Hilda chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Wonderful story, I like so much, poor Johnny!, jjaja.
ploring chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
What a wonderful story, so much emotion and so original!
karen chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Great story.
SaraiEsq chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Nicely done. Lots of good stuff herein. :-)
5secondrule chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Love love love! So many great one- liners intertwined with a great story. WOOT!
sandra6820012002 chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
I cannot wait to see what happens
lovepeacebird chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
What an awesome story i could not stop reading it intil i was done :)
Alana Carol chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Like all your stories alot of fun and alot of things to think about. Respectful of the originaql characters as they were on the show but with your own personal twist and interpitations.
sandybeliever chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Loved this! Thank you. *big grin*
ginabelle64 chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Oh wow! What a great story! I really did enjoy it!