|Reviews for Becoming Us (Part 1)|
| Carling chapter 22 . 3/22
So beautifully done.
| Carling chapter 18 . 3/21
Well that was a nasty surprise. I adore fan fiction Pansy, but ewww.
| Carling chapter 17 . 3/21
I love this story and had to stop and comment that the wanky chicken part had me laughing out loud and unable to stop for quite a few minutes. I feel so very twelve.
| This-Girl-Is-Riddikulus chapter 11 . 8/6/2014
I was right yay! Lol Draco's being s cunt
| This-Girl-Is-Riddikulus chapter 10 . 8/6/2014
He could do it the muggle way, laser?
| Calenmiriel of Durin chapter 18 . 7/31/2014
I honestly absolutely LOVED LOVED LOVED this fic, until this chapter... I'm so disappointed in Draco... I get he's s teenager with hormones, but some of us are sensitive, ya know? Maybe you could put a D/H 'eventually' warning on this fic... I know I wouldn't have read it if I knew Draco was gonna take a blow job from some one else...
I'll probably continue to read this and most of your stories, since I love what you have already done... I just gotta pray I don't come across something like this again I guess...
| Ellen chapter 18 . 7/5/2014
Well...i was enjoying this until now. I don't really see why that was necessary for the story at all and it just came out of no where. I mean, fair enough, its your story, do what you want with it. But i don't enjoy reading graphic Draco and Pansy to be perfectly honest, i came to read a Draco and harry story. It's put me off this story completely, I'm sorry.
| Noxy the Proxy chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
I will defiantly read more!
| I know okay chapter 22 . 3/30/2014
That was brilliant. On to the second one.
| I know okay chapter 21 . 3/30/2014
So sad to have to mourn your parents, no matter the reason. The kiss was sweet.
| I know okay chapter 20 . 3/29/2014
That's nice of him.
| I know okay chapter 19 . 3/29/2014
That wasn't awkward at all.
| I know okay chapter 18 . 3/29/2014
I bet he wishes that was Harry instead.
| I know okay chapter 17 . 3/29/2014
| I know okay chapter 16 . 3/29/2014