|Reviews for Reclaiming the Throne|
| Twilight AngelDemon chapter 32 . 8/19
Ta-dah! Hey man Hare lemon? That's... Well, how can I put this. Hare losing her innocence would be terrible at least if she does it with someone she truly loves. The only problem is Shu is alreday taken by Inori.
Can't wait for update.
| sage of the sexy chapter 32 . 8/4
That sounds completely and definitely like a porno. I know because I have a PnD on the subject.
| Gh0stfAceekilla chapter 32 . 8/4
it's alright still likey to love it xD
| Gh0stfAceekilla chapter 31 . 8/4
Amzing one of the best storys iv read in a long time Keep up the good work
| obsidianminer67 chapter 31 . 8/3
Hey. Sorry I haven't been posting anything for the past few chapters.
Shame that Argo died. Could have been pretty interesting seeing him going through a leader phase.
Other than that I'm starting to think things are getting interesting.
As for the POV, I would like a Mana POV. It would be a nice parallel to the ShuXInori lemon
| Sakurada Kiritsugu chapter 31 . 7/31
Shu has truly gone beyond mortal men, both in power and in mentality... now the kingdom knows not to fuck with him.
| WinxWin chapter 31 . 7/31
I would like to see the mainstory develop rather than the side,but some Mana-Gai lemon would be interesting g as well hoho
| SkullReader chapter 31 . 7/30
I really enjoy this chapter and I have to say u made Argo's death seem a little bit better then I predicted. Oh and when will the SDF play a major part in this they seem to be left out of the action, at least in my eyes.
| Akatsuki chapter 31 . 7/30
Having just finish the latest chapter,I would say that it has been really brilliant,with all unexpected twist the plot thrills me it up and You are really one writer I look up to in fanfiction because of your preservarance.
| Twilight AngelDemon chapter 31 . 7/30
"You're King's Power? Argo, you were just a pretender to the Throne or had you forgotten. I am the King and I have returned!"
Best fucking chapter ever$ Now this is what I'm talking about! Reading this with Skillet I Need A Hero was just... Great! My Heart was breaking when Inori was taken, but Shu becoming what he was always meant to be was. That just really was awesome.
Harune you fucking biatch! I hope Shu kills you in the worst way ever. Nanba's gang I hope they get what they deserve. They don't belong in Shu and Inori's Kingdom, Tokyo. I hope they die the most horrible deaths ever.
Yuu should just get erased by Shu and Inori, man his really getting on my nerves. Da'ath I honestly need to see what you will do with them.
A Mana POV that's a lemon, I like it. Please do it but at least after the main story please.
Please update soon and thanks for the read!
| Decus777 chapter 31 . 7/29
I may have only recently started reading your work but once I did I literally couldn't put it down. Its hard to find adaptations of good anime like this one. Even harder still to find continuations of those stories in a convincing and original way. I applaud you and thoroughly intend to watch what you do from now on. I as a writer have learned quite a bit so thank you. As far as critiques go everything was great as usual. But I only hope Shu retains his honor as a king. Something he doesn't believe he has but inn reality always tries to maintain. The struggle of maintaining honor is something i strongly identify with so i hope her continues that struggle. Just a personal note.
| MEleeSmasher chapter 31 . 7/29
Well, I hope Shu wont go crazy evil like in the anime. That would be bad...
| Ford1114 chapter 31 . 7/29
So this is the final chapter for the second arc’s finale. Okay, I’m going in-depth on this to help your motivation.
It is darkness from our main character, Shu cries out her name. He and Hare are captured by Yuu, the cause of all the problems in this story. Yes, I remember the rings from the meteorite by Keido. Not to mention the voids are originally part of Mana herself, whether it’s a plot-hole or something remains unclear though..
-Since Episodes 11-12 was the second time that crystal tower containing Mana is made. The first time actually happened during Lost Christmas before Scrooge/Carol stopped it. Thank Lost Christmas Game/OVA for helping you after all since it remind us of Fate/zero (I finally manage to watch all of it after giving a second chance and enjoyed it) while GC is Fate/stay night.
So that shop keeper is secretly a Da’ath agent. And then Inori vanishes from Da’ath’s grasp, leaving Shu so empty to save her again.
Ayase and Argo argue I didn’t see it coming. Nice to see Ayase calling Argo a ‘marionette’ of Funeral Parlor, showing that his own ideals eventually blind him. And boy am I right, because Shu is back in front of him and he is MAD.
Looks like some people can understand and remind that being a hero is tough and the real world is nothing but shades of gray. Yes, being ‘the king’ is hard. Ah, Argo feels like dying so he can meet Oogumo again (that makes us once again ponder whether Shibungi will appear).
….and Argo is killed by Shu. I am shock by this, but it leads to the next event.
The Undertakers are rewritten to King Ouma Shu’s knights of his royal army. No more modern human factions, only regress to royal monarchy in medieval times. I feel a reminder of Emperor Lelouch here.
You made it half the way through of this wonderful story. That’s why the Checkmates alternate names act as a season finale and another Code Geass reference. I’d like to see Nanba/Ritsu’s POV and Mana’s lemon before the third arc. Let’s hope to bring some creativity when the fifth anniversary of GC comes.
| predatorform chapter 30 . 7/22
Holy crap. As soon as I clicked on this chapter I broke into the craziest grin, this has to be one of the longest one yet.
I love the idea of Jun's Void being a hacking tool, it's really creative, and it really opens up more possibilities in future battle scenarios. Overall, this story is golden, everything seems to be wrapped up neatly in a larger narrative, and everything makes logical and chronological sense, a rarity in the fanfiction world. Every action has a direct and interesting consequence, take Inori healing the hobo for an example. Every scene in your story is interesting and unique, and I really think you do justice to the original anime series - even more so in many cases.
Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the second arc of this story, keep writing!
| Generation Zero chapter 30 . 7/21
Awesome chapter bro