|Reviews for Reclaiming the throne|
| Fidelis Virtu chapter 7 . 3/11
A very good fic. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
It was quite the lead up to when Shu finally becomes king and reunites with Inori, but it was completely worth it! I wouldn't change anything about her! She is a delightful mix of naivety and massive power. I couldn't help but laugh for a minute during the wedding and "asking for children" part. Truly hilarious. At the same time, I can't even imagine how epic it would look to have two crystal queesn battling over a crystal landscape with even the mountains being used as projectiles. Oh sometimes, I just wish that some one would be able to make a picture of that that would do it justice. Heck, I wish that this was the true anime ending. Long live King Shu and Queen Inori!
Juan is funny. I did find him a little hard to follow at times, but, as long as you give them personalities, I think that Oc's are one of the most important parts to a fanfiction. They reflect the author.
Antagonist huh? hmmmm...That is tough. Honestly, I would like to see Mana remain the antagonist. I do so love her brand of crazy. Maybe she messes with the surviving Cocoons that were left behind, and these troops would become her *insert-appropriately-ominous-title-here*. They would be pretty twisted, (I mean after all, Inori isn't there to act as a moderating influence right?"), and they could be used as a counter balance against Shu's power. I would hope that Daa'th brings Mana back, and then they stand back. They want the two Eve's to fight it out over the planet in order to see who is the strongest. I think that jives with their whole "evolution" thing. Of course, Mana might see it as getting rid of the witch that seduced Shu. It would also be interesting to see Hare's reaction to InorixShu. After all, the power to heal is almost as strong as the power to destroy.
Anyway, I loved the fic, and I don't think you should be too worried about length. I for one simply get lost in a book, and this just immerses me in your world. Thanks for what you have so far!
| MEleeSmasher chapter 7 . 2/22
This is a good story bro, the arc is treated like something I see in the anime. Well done.
| MEleeSmasher chapter 4 . 2/22
I want to see more of this. Please continue.
| Cloud0 chapter 7 . 2/12
really awesome story i hope you still continue writing this story
| Sozo chapter 7 . 2/7
Love this fanfic! This is a great piece of work! I'm pretty sure others want to see what else you have in mind. Please continue writing! We'll be waiting (づ )づ
| Exalted Demi-Soul chapter 7 . 2/6
...At this rate, people are going to be utterly terrified every time Christmas approaches. I wouldn't be surprised if there were a few weary souls out there already.
| Jaddi chapter 7 . 1/21
when is the update please!
| AlexanderTheNightKing chapter 7 . 1/18
i wanna the rest of the story when you gonna make it ?
| AlexanderTheNightKing chapter 1 . 12/25/2013
pretty please continue this story like this i hated the end of the series as it as but i am loving the end you are giving to it
| MangamanZX chapter 7 . 12/16/2013
This is great, Shu and Inori are both amazing... Loved Hare's thought process by the way
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/27/2013
Hey you should make it with happy ending okay ifyou don't all of your chapters will be in vain that a good story anyway i want to add you to my friend if you had line addnme okay find thebname reef / my my id rickytantowi1234 you find itwith some green creature staring at candy
| TheBloodEdge chapter 7 . 11/6/2013
Next chapter please !
I want to see more of this awesome story
| Diouf chapter 7 . 10/28/2013
GREAT FANFIC! TALENTED WRITER! UPDATE SOON!
| Shu Ouma GC chapter 6 . 10/28/2013
Also I forgot that us reader love long chapter that how story that are good suppose to be because long chapter that have a good plot is what make this story better then an anime I bet if people for Watch Guilty crown and don't like the ending would 110% definitely read this master pieces to truly what a real would write and you are a truly great author/writer of GC you have done great research on every single character back ground and express who they are in the story which made people want to read it.
Keep up the excellent work!
| Shu Ouma GC chapter 5 . 10/28/2013
A master piece writing! Update more!