Reviews for The Campione of Heroes
StoryReiter chapter 7 . 5/26
I did not expect for Saber to enter the story in such a way. Shirou's distortion also came to light... So we also have a possible version of Rin with Saber in one body... Sweeeeet... Amazing though... In some cases you could use Unlimited Bladeworks to lessen collateral damage, I mean he has the reserves for it now. With him being a Campione and all he is as close as he can get from being a "Hero of Justice". I just hope he does not get consumed like Archer EMIYA did. If by any chance you read this thanks for writing and have a good day and please do take care of yourself.
Masterx01 chapter 1 . 3/23
Ea isnt a demonic sword D: Its a divine construct created by a god. So, if anything it would be a holy sword instead of a demonic and even then it doesnt qualify for it.

Wow, that 'stronger than me here' needs some context because is Gil would kill himself first before saying that to anyone.

In gonna express how much Gil hates the gods and any that have to do with them with this Nasu-style: Gilgamesh HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES, HATES THE GODS. He would not, under any circumstances, be happy due being transformed into one.

Also Gil overall mood depends of the status of the humanity in the time he is summoned. Here in the campioneverse, with the status of the humanity as how its by itself and as a canon fodder against the menace of the gods bar 7 persons that arent exactly humans anymore coupled with the fact of being transformed into a god, he would be ABSOLUTELY LIVID! Not laughting like a third rate villain after some power-up.

Servants cannont be damaged by comon means, even if a nuke explodes in their faces, that will not do anything to them and even if that knife was made with prana, that kind of trash tier weapon would never damage a servant. Now going by Campeone standarts, outside of Campiones nobody can damage the gods and even the best weapons handed down by gods to humans can only do so much against them. They could damage a god, but they would never be close enough to be even a menace to them and only those that had in the first place the posibility of being a Campione could do the deed.
Esmereilda chapter 7 . 3/14
well the chains of Enkidu will be highly effective against hercules
Esmereilda chapter 3 . 3/10
for some reason alice's father reminds of major Armstrong from fma in this chapter
Esmereilda chapter 2 . 3/9
XD poor shiro
Rangle chapter 3 . 6/25/2016
It seems you are underestimating Noble Phantasm from Type-Moon/Fate. Do you realize that NP can reach planet buster level? Not a city, not a nation, but the whole planet? Nasuverse is not weaker than Campioneverse, heh. Bro, you should be ashamed of yourself for dissing Type-Moon/Fate lore just to prop up Campione. If the reason for that is because you want to keep Shirou not OP, then try to find other ways to do it. Pissing half the fandom of a crossover is not really smart. If you can't stay true to the source materials, you shouldn't write a cross. Well, you can if you make it a complete AU. I hope more people called you out on your bullshit, LOL.
Rangle chapter 2 . 6/25/2016
Mongrel! You dare!?
lalpoi.nakamura chapter 7 . 6/6/2016
A fanfic with so much potential... It's a shame dt it is not updated for a looooonnnggg tym
blazaboi chapter 3 . 5/4/2016
the fight was boring it kinda reminded me of naruto where he should of been out of energy only to pull a bullshit amount of power out of his ass
GrimmPandaMan chapter 2 . 4/10/2016
I lobe how his personality changes when he uses that authority! HAHAHAHAHA AWESOME
Paxloria chapter 7 . 1/23/2016
Its a good chapter!
It'd be great if you updated!
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on the whole black-bar-Herkles-roar thing, your best bet on how to do that is to ask an author thats already don it how to do it.
Hope that helps.
Paxloria chapter 3 . 1/23/2016
Awesome chapter!
Paxloria chapter 1 . 1/22/2016
Great chapter.

Umm, Gilgamesh can't raise his other arm if he only has one arm.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/17/2016
great chapter please update more
Logan- Murder of Crows chapter 4 . 12/2/2015
[Author goes on huge spiel about the supposed difference between Authorities and Noble Phantasms]

• Noble Phantasm: Described as "powerful armaments made using the imagination of humans as their core, the embodiment of the ultimate mysteries of a hero (but gods have always been confirmed to also have them even in the original story) that symbolizes his/her existence through historical facts and anecdotes." Come in all sorts of types, from anti-self to anti-unit to anti-mystery to anti-divinity to anti-planet, with a wide assortment of powers such as shooting energy blasts, manipulate elements, manipulate time and causality, manipulate dimensions, curse billions of people into oblivion, turn fictional accounts into real ones, defy the second law of thermodynamics, outright warp reality within a boundary, manipulate the victim's constitution/health, regeneration, immortality, near-invulnerability, resurrection, true invincibility, summon an entire army of lesser heroes, summon an army of Lovecraftian abominations, summon powerful monsters, creation of life, negate immortality and divinity, petrify people (actually, that was a mystic eye, but it might as well be a Noble Phantasm), transformation, attack and defend via the strength of concepts alone, copy and reproduce near-perfect replicas of incredible powerful weapons, flight, interstellar travel, split one into dozens of different versions of oneself, negate the opponent's abilities and weapons, steal an opponent's abilities and weapons, gain access all styles of magic, use the entire planet for m*sturbation because you're a stupid sl*tty demon-goddess wannabe, and many more.

• Authority: Described as "the divine powers, attributes, qualities, and weapons, of gods, heroes, demons, and monsters, which make them invincible to normal humans, shaped by the myths and legends that give birth to them." Can do stuff like increase strength or speed according to a threat, summon monsters, negate divinity, resurrect, manipulate elements, cut through most things, control animals, petrify people, summon darkness, transformation, warp reality within a boundary, negate the opponent's abilities and weapons, steal an opponent's abilities and weapons, manipulate time and causality, and many more.

—Wait, don't those sound like they're... EXACTLY THE SAME?

...Come on, you know that's true! In Fate, "Authorities" are called "Noble Phantasms". In Campione!, "Noble Phantasms" are called "Authorities". They're different names for the same concept in different franchises. Bringing one over to the other wouldn't change the fact that they're the same thing to begin with, and all that would happen is that the name would change. Trying to reason that they're different and that one should inherently be weaker than the other is just illogical!

—Oh Kain, you can't hide it from me! You just needed a reason to keep Shirou from being crazy powerful! While that's certainly true (Shirou without reasonable prana limitations is kiiiiiiinda OP for most settings), you choose a really... questionable method of going about doing it.

Don't you think it's a maybe bad idea to possibly tick off half of your potential fanbase by saying "your side's shit is weaker by default"? Especially when that doesn't make any logical sense to begin with since both of them are the exact same concept, as I've pointed out?
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