|Reviews for The Campione of Heroes|
| Rangle chapter 3 . 6/25/2016
It seems you are underestimating Noble Phantasm from Type-Moon/Fate. Do you realize that NP can reach planet buster level? Not a city, not a nation, but the whole planet? Nasuverse is not weaker than Campioneverse, heh. Bro, you should be ashamed of yourself for dissing Type-Moon/Fate lore just to prop up Campione. If the reason for that is because you want to keep Shirou not OP, then try to find other ways to do it. Pissing half the fandom of a crossover is not really smart. If you can't stay true to the source materials, you shouldn't write a cross. Well, you can if you make it a complete AU. I hope more people called you out on your bullshit, LOL.
| Rangle chapter 2 . 6/25/2016
Mongrel! You dare!?
| lalpoi.nakamura chapter 7 . 6/6/2016
A fanfic with so much potential... It's a shame dt it is not updated for a looooonnnggg tym
| blazaboi chapter 3 . 5/4/2016
the fight was boring it kinda reminded me of naruto where he should of been out of energy only to pull a bullshit amount of power out of his ass
| GrimmPandaMan chapter 2 . 4/10/2016
I lobe how his personality changes when he uses that authority! HAHAHAHAHA AWESOME
| Paxloria chapter 7 . 1/23/2016
Its a good chapter!
It'd be great if you updated!
on the whole black-bar-Herkles-roar thing, your best bet on how to do that is to ask an author thats already don it how to do it.
Hope that helps.
| Paxloria chapter 3 . 1/23/2016
| Paxloria chapter 1 . 1/22/2016
Umm, Gilgamesh can't raise his other arm if he only has one arm.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/17/2016
great chapter please update more
| Logan- Murder of Crows chapter 4 . 12/2/2015
[Author goes on huge spiel about the supposed difference between Authorities and Noble Phantasms]
• Noble Phantasm: Described as "powerful armaments made using the imagination of humans as their core, the embodiment of the ultimate mysteries of a hero (but gods have always been confirmed to also have them even in the original story) that symbolizes his/her existence through historical facts and anecdotes." Come in all sorts of types, from anti-self to anti-unit to anti-mystery to anti-divinity to anti-planet, with a wide assortment of powers such as shooting energy blasts, manipulate elements, manipulate time and causality, manipulate dimensions, curse billions of people into oblivion, turn fictional accounts into real ones, defy the second law of thermodynamics, outright warp reality within a boundary, manipulate the victim's constitution/health, regeneration, immortality, near-invulnerability, resurrection, true invincibility, summon an entire army of lesser heroes, summon an army of Lovecraftian abominations, summon powerful monsters, creation of life, negate immortality and divinity, petrify people (actually, that was a mystic eye, but it might as well be a Noble Phantasm), transformation, attack and defend via the strength of concepts alone, copy and reproduce near-perfect replicas of incredible powerful weapons, flight, interstellar travel, split one into dozens of different versions of oneself, negate the opponent's abilities and weapons, steal an opponent's abilities and weapons, gain access all styles of magic, use the entire planet for m*sturbation because you're a stupid sl*tty demon-goddess wannabe, and many more.
• Authority: Described as "the divine powers, attributes, qualities, and weapons, of gods, heroes, demons, and monsters, which make them invincible to normal humans, shaped by the myths and legends that give birth to them." Can do stuff like increase strength or speed according to a threat, summon monsters, negate divinity, resurrect, manipulate elements, cut through most things, control animals, petrify people, summon darkness, transformation, warp reality within a boundary, negate the opponent's abilities and weapons, steal an opponent's abilities and weapons, manipulate time and causality, and many more.
—Wait, don't those sound like they're... EXACTLY THE SAME?
...Come on, you know that's true! In Fate, "Authorities" are called "Noble Phantasms". In Campione!, "Noble Phantasms" are called "Authorities". They're different names for the same concept in different franchises. Bringing one over to the other wouldn't change the fact that they're the same thing to begin with, and all that would happen is that the name would change. Trying to reason that they're different and that one should inherently be weaker than the other is just illogical!
—Oh Kain, you can't hide it from me! You just needed a reason to keep Shirou from being crazy powerful! While that's certainly true (Shirou without reasonable prana limitations is kiiiiiiinda OP for most settings), you choose a really... questionable method of going about doing it.
Don't you think it's a maybe bad idea to possibly tick off half of your potential fanbase by saying "your side's shit is weaker by default"? Especially when that doesn't make any logical sense to begin with since both of them are the exact same concept, as I've pointed out?
| DarkElucidator chapter 7 . 12/1/2015
Strike Air: Hammer of the Wind King
| Gold2King chapter 7 . 11/29/2015
Hopefully this'll get updated more :P
Happy ending would be cool. A badass one would be pretty sweet too.
Like that one story where Shirou rejects everything and gets the 1st Magic...and summons Kirito for some reason. Well, technically the Cardinal but Kitito did all the fighting and stuff, you know?
| Dream chapter 2 . 11/19/2015
Major personality change , holy ...
| Im a guest chapter 7 . 9/14/2015
2years of no comment?
| ZE Bri-0n chapter 5 . 9/10/2015
About the AN on top of the last chapter: you're arguing that Authorities aren't classifiable under the NP system, but all of those examples are. Anti-Divine, Anti-Thaumaturgy( those Golden Sword are almost identical in effect to two different pre-existing NPs, Anti-Self, etc. Also, are you saying that Authorities can defeat Avalon? Cause of you are, I'm calling bullshit. You want to say that Authorities are more powerful than NPs( gods heroes, after all, makes perfect sense)? Sure. But an Authority defeating Avalon itself? I'm calling bullshit right there. The thing is, that the mechanics for Heroic Spirits and Heretic Gods are nearly identical: when one's legend grows, it shapes the power and possession of them. For those that actually existed ( which is not all HS, even in the Nasuverse), the Truth still has a predominant effect. Both return to an alternate dimension when slain, both primarily manifest as Natural Disasters, etc. But an EX Noble Phantasm's power is absolute. It's on par with the Five True Magics. A puny god going toe to toe with that? Yeah, no. A True Magic can turn an above average magus- but still easily within human capabilities- into a power to rival a Campione. With just a decade of experience with it. Without the addition of any Mystic Codes. That much destruction, effortlessly, with merely human reserves of power. Add in jewel magecraft, and the Blue is pretty much the scourge of the Campioneverse. And remember Zelretch and the Crimson Moon? Yeah, gods True Magicians. True Magicians Avalon EX rank Noble Phantasm. Oh Root, imagine the Blue with a Jeweled Sword of Zelretch... Anyway, in the Naruverse, Authority is the divine power to "enact miracles simply because one has the right". That's what constitutes Divinity in the Nasuverse. Now, if Authority is pretty much the same in the Campione universe, then Enkidu will how a god, even one like Gawaine. That said, however, I'm pretty sure the Chain's power is to "capture gods and hold them". But until it captures a god, it's just a chain. Capture is easily avoidable.