Nice chapter, I would have to say this is my favorite chapter at the moment. Seeing Tenten was definitely an unexpected twist. I guess from the looks of it she’s a dropout like Shikamaru and Naruto. And from the looks of it she knows it just like Shikamaru knows their dropouts. It’s only a matter of time before Naruto figures it out or Shikamaru or Tenten take pity on him and just say it.

Nice chapter it was nice to see Naruto to get a teacher. And Shigure is the perfect choice for him since she never really had a true student. The rivalry between Naruto and Freya is quite nicely done. Just don’t forget Valkyrie has to have her own match with her.

Cue the evil laughter because I'm not good at at?...good for you neither am I.

Great chapter and the fights were awesome, but it would have been nice if Kenichi still fought Takeda instead. As for Shikamaru it looks like he won’t be able to stay on the sidelines for much longer. As for Shigure wanting to train Naruto I would love to see that happen he can only go so far on his own.

Awesome chapter, it was nice to see Naruto to be forced back and have to fight seriously for once. As for the Shigure/Naruto moment I think I know what you have planned so I can't wait to find out.

Just glad we have an author who writes abt naruto's development instead of making him up d gud wrk.

Wow cant wait till they meet with the ninja team.

I loved this story, can you believe i finished this in exactly 2 days

Ok its official this story is going straight to favs. Normally I wait 5 chapters before I add anything but this story is so good I don't need anymore convincing.

As for the actual chapter it was the best one yet. How Kenichi finally found out Naruto was a ninja was a little funny. Then the fight between Naruto and Koga was funny to read, as well as antagonizing Valkyrie.

Great job man

Great job

Pretty good

Quite the excellent story (as always) and I look forward to seeing more fights with YOMI. I always love how you describe fights in a way few authors can match. Now I'm also going to need to read Kenichi to see how the original is. So thank you.

Great job

Awesome second chapter, I like how Miu and Naruto interact with each other. She tries to get close to him but he keeps on trying to maintain his distance and failing. I feel sorry for Naruto he doesn’t realize that the Homeland have given up on him, and when he finds out you can bet it’s going to be earth shattering for him. I do have to agree with Naruto though Kenichi should have just accepted the win, rules be Damned.