|Reviews for True Prince|
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/23/2013
Just found this fan fic love it plz hurry and update, its sho hes teamed up with rino y o take her from ren
| Smile99 chapter 2 . 9/26/2013
| Socat14 chapter 2 . 8/7/2013
You torment me with all these unfinished stories! And I know that "Corn" isn't Sho, cause Kyoko would recognize him. I'm stumped as to who "Corn" may be.
| Socat14 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! It's Rieno! I'm crying again! How dare you make me cry twice! Must read more...
| rsrdiall chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
I liked how their thoughts were linked. I hope he hurries to get to her. Who knows what that beagle will do. Great chapter!
| rsrdiall chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Interesting start here. I don't really have any theories on the fake Corn. Maybe Sho? There are a few wording errors but they don't take away from the chapter. I'm interested to see where this goes!
| LeeTae chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
Ahhhh! Now that I've read it, I need more! Please update soon :)
| JCB13 chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
This is good... really it is, I'm just a bit confuzzled by the mysterious plot line. Please keep it this mysterious! I'm hooked! This is an odd story. I never could have thought of it! You are brilliant!
| Data Seeker chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
I bungled the review and sent the first review in the second. Sorry.
Since I can't reverse it, I'll put the second review in the first.
The quality is good in some areas, but the paragraph settings and a few other things need a ton of work. You should change your style and get a Beta.
The beginning and the following Kyoko in captivity and taunted and fearful are very dynamic; full of suspense, drama and depth.
The parts with Ren worry about Kyoko and wanting to save her are great.
The wholesome standards are good in some areas, but others need work.
The reference to sex abuse is passabl- THANK YOU for not being graphic in any sense of the word. Also, its great how you put God and demons in your story.
But a few uncalled cuss words are present. Do you think it’s proper for a Christain to do that? God bless.
| Data Seeker chapter 2 . 3/24/2013
Nice story. The quality is good, except for the paragraph style (which tampers the quality and makes it hard to understand). You need to change your style and get a Beta.
The basic story seems good, but a few details didn’t make sense (probably cause of the paragraphs confusing me). I think the character portrayal is mostly good, but a part with REn felt out of character- though I could be wrong.
The wholesome standards are pretty high.
The language is clean.
The sensual content is passable. Wish others were careful too.
No violence or any other vile content.
I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.
| RusAme.PruCan.UkUs chapter 2 . 3/18/2013
corn?...could be sho for all we know but why would he work with reino when he hates the guy?...i'm a little confused at the moment...maybe a crazed fan of Kyokos? :\ ...or it could be one of your OC's :P
P.S please write more chapters XD
| RusAme.PruCan.UkUs chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
it seems like its reino to me...
| Yuki Suou chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
Is Corn an OC u created?
Sorry 4 reviewing late i was stuck...
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/7/2013
i think kuon's cousin ;p
| Crazygeekweirdo chapter 2 . 3/7/2013
I know i'm a guest, so i really didn't think you would reply (So happy you did though *jumping up and down in glee*) . Thank you for thinking over my advise :) ! I will continue to give you constructive criticism XD ! (so prepare to be stalked by me!) I am also reading your other stories and i have a questien for you... How come you can keep getting great ideas? You dont have to answer, i guess youre just awsome XD ! I was thinking about who "Corn" was. Besides Kyoko and Reino i can only think of one magical person...But i don't get how Maria got so tall :P ...