Reviews for A Long Night
Mega07ghost chapter 1 . 2/3
Oh my god, little Charlie is so cute :3
justsaying chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
This was a really good story. I have had to deal with this situation, and you described it very well. Please continue to write, you do a great job.
notsing chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
I liked this. Yes, Charlie does seem childish here, but I imagine as a child Charlie was a weird mixture of being too mature at times and too immature at other times. Let's face it, he's not suppose to be normal with a normal childhood, so I think his behavior wasn't too out of line.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
That was awesome. Please write more. Thank u
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
I guess what bothered me through an otherwise sweet story is that Charlie seemed so much younger than eight -more like a four or five year old.
phnxgrl chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
I loved this one shot. I loved how Don was so responsible for his younger brother. Kudos.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Sorry, but I dont think that their parents would have slept through all this. They would have heard the water running for the bath.
numb3rs mystery chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
awwwww this was sooooo cute and sweet and adorable.
it was so Don like not to want himself if he was scared.
fantastic and funny one shot , it made me laugh a lot.
wonderful job.