Reviews for A Long Night
Leonora Chris chapter 1 . 10/12
Aww... This was so sweet... 3
Caitlyn chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
You MUST RIGHT MORE! You're an Amazing Author and this Story Defiantly Has Potential. i'm an Author Of Fanfic's myself and this one is great! You HAV To WRITE More. You're GREAT!
Mega07ghost chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
Oh my god, little Charlie is so cute :3
justsaying chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
This was a really good story. I have had to deal with this situation, and you described it very well. Please continue to write, you do a great job.
notsing chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
I liked this. Yes, Charlie does seem childish here, but I imagine as a child Charlie was a weird mixture of being too mature at times and too immature at other times. Let's face it, he's not suppose to be normal with a normal childhood, so I think his behavior wasn't too out of line.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
That was awesome. Please write more. Thank u
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
I guess what bothered me through an otherwise sweet story is that Charlie seemed so much younger than eight -more like a four or five year old.
phnxgrl chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
I loved this one shot. I loved how Don was so responsible for his younger brother. Kudos.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Sorry, but I dont think that their parents would have slept through all this. They would have heard the water running for the bath.
numb3rs mystery chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
awwwww this was sooooo cute and sweet and adorable.
it was so Don like not to want himself if he was scared.
fantastic and funny one shot , it made me laugh a lot.
wonderful job.