Reviews for Focus
Hope Thorn chapter 1 . 2/14
They made a bet? Lol
dragon fier 20 chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Hahahahahahahahahhahaha zayn caught them! Hahaha, I loved it a lot! Niall is my absolutely favorite band member, and Liam is close behind, after Louis! I loved it!
Whimsical Symphony chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.
2. One or two liners.
3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.
4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries

This is in violation of section four of the content guidelines due to the inclusion of real people. I suggest that you replace these real people for characters in a fandom you like, or move the story altogether to a site that allows this content before it is reported. Thank you.

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