|Reviews for Subway cliché|
| Kyprioth chapter 2 . 3/25
Damn it! I was a SILENT surveyor of porn until I found your gold mine.
(Gibbers incoherently )
Not the most kinky porn I have ever read, but definitely one of THE best written !
May the muses favor you,
(Muttering to myself about the unfairness of being a paranoid closet pervert... though maybe not closet for too much longer(pouts)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/3
It was awesome!
| kisa14 chapter 1 . 1/6
This is a very awesome story !
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
you are amazing! i am going to read the rest of your writing now cause omg!
| Dusty Miller chapter 2 . 12/1/2014
Åh herregud... mitt ordförråd kommer att lida brist på allmänvett, just saying. The way it all started was just too awesome for me to be able and put it into words. And for some reason I kept on imagining Eskilstuna and Stockholm's tube... oh well. Oh yeah, and Karin was brilliant! The way she and Sasuke bickered in a way I had hoped would become cannon one day, made my insides crawl in excitement. I was so sad when we didn't get to see her in chapter 700! Now, I will confess that I liked the first chapter more than the second, but I'm so used to reading one-shots that it could be because of that. Thank you for writing and sharing! I've got to check out the rest of your work now...
| Jessica McCulley chapter 2 . 11/6/2014
I love long term happy endings!
| ibuki chapter 2 . 8/25/2014
Oh. My. God. I LOVE it! It was amazing, it was hot/sexy yet cute and funny! It made me giddleand grin like a creep. I was too into it for my own good haha! I just love it overall
| AzucenaXshadows chapter 2 . 8/25/2014
My face is so red right now.
But honestly I would have like a full blown story for this. It was really interesting ( and no I'm not just say that for the sex lmao)
But even though it's short it was good.
Thank u again for sharing.
| ZapHats chapter 2 . 8/24/2014
More smex! More smex! More smex!
| BootyWumps chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
Loved this story! Perfect mix of sexy, sweet, and funny
| Crying chapter 2 . 7/27/2014
Oh my god it doesn't get cutter then this OMG OMG OMG I thank you for this beauty *wipes tear and blows nose* I thank you...I thank you so much
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
This is my favorite story so far! I love the banter at the beginning, it cracked me up. :D Thanks for posting, you are quite a good writer!
| ANDY chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
AWESOME SO SO AWESOME IM A TOTAL SASUNARU FAN I LOVE THIS PARING SO SO MUCH AND U MY DEAR HAVE JUST WRITEN THE BEST SASUNARU FANFIC EVER p.s by the way im a girl
| P. Cythera chapter 2 . 6/22/2014
Lol, naruto's little breakdown was funny. I liked how you made all the characters connected somehow...itachi in game design lol. Great work!
| P. Cythera chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
Oh just loved how they meet :) keep up the great work!