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Filigranka chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
I love the concept of magic as kind of network. I really like the Luna's explanation, too - so in-character. Nice detail.

And it's so like Snape to complain and lecture Harry even in that situation. I'd expect no less from him.
Endgames chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Hehehehehehehehehe, nice. This was worth a good giggle. "Honestly, what kind of wizard uses a rock?"
XXPay4XtraShippingsXX chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
That was very well-written! It soooo should have happened in the book, lol.
Keep writing and God bless!
TharzZzDunN chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
This was a fun idea, thanks for writing!

Byakusharinnegan chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Hogwarts should start teaching how to throw rocks.
Bad Mum chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
LOL. I love Snape's disgust at the rock, and the whole idea of the system being overloaded and magic going down. Good story.
Chaos - Moved chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
This is pure genius.
Pfft, bashing old geezers with rocks. What a way for a powerful wizard to go.
Vera Rozalsky chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
I laughed more than once here, particularly at Snape's sniffy indignation. Bashing evil geezers with rocks, while not sporting, gets the job done. And I loved the picture of a network crash... which, like many things, is very much more entertaining in fiction than in Real Life So-Called.
silverbirch chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
After Saturn I decided I had to read more of your work. It makes a pleasant change from Draco getting pregnant!

This was a clever story - and funny - but there is also a basis to it. What is magic? It must be some kind of power source.

Congratulations on writing a very convincing Snape as well. He caused a good few giggles.
Kiss-Kiss-Kiss-Goodbye chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Fantatsic! As usual of course :)
Runecutter chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
You'd think the bitter old picture would be happier that his murderer has been judged and gone on to the next great adventure... typical of Snape to only see the lemons in the fruit basket...

The idea has some merit and they could have even supported it by organizing as much "high power" magic being used as possible... training the DA to have more stamina or using special charm selections and so on... collecting more free wizards to fight and whatever else... if nothing happened it would still give them an edge against the enemies...
Krulk chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Best Ending Ever...

Kudos to you my friend, today you have surpassed the highest bar ever set and killed the "Magicnet" for a great total of fifteen minutes...
Pyeknu chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Sometimes, the simple solutions are indeed the best ones. _
SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Snarky64 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Another highly original story. I do like the way your mind works.

"It could be that I did not hear the entire prophecy, because it seems that what happened was the power Tom knew, being magic, not working." How funny!

Although I think magic would be a talent and energy internal to the witch or wizard, rather than something external, like electricity, I still think this is another great story. Well done!
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