OMFG i love you 3 please continue this *drools* ( ps. Im a girl)

Wonderful story. A sequel would be even better. But it's still good with just this alone.

Why is this categorised as Spanish?

Damn. Hot damn. xD
Ichigo: WHY DO YOU READ THESE THINGS!?
ME: 'cause it's hot.
Hollow Ichigo: *grins* Oi? Am I Ichi's master in this thing? *chuckles darkly* I like the sound of that.
Ichigo: Oh sh- *pulled into the bedroom by at certain hollow*

wow! I wish that this story did was not a one shot. It seem to that Dark Ichigo is trying to mold Ichigo into something more then the horse. He could be trying to make Ichigo into something like a weapon. If I was Aizen I would kill Ichigo now so dark Ichigo would not be a threat to in the future.

-mimi

Don't mind me...I'll just be over here...trying to stop my nosebleed... *fails miserably and faints on the floor*

Hawt...Damn...I uh...O.O *brain and nose bleeds and falls dead in cellphone*

It turned out good. I don't think there were any errors. Ichi needs to be nicer to you. Oh well... what do you do with guys like Ichi and Inu? Make 'em pay in the authoress notes -hehehe- LOL! Keep up the good work!