I absolutely loved this story!

Oh shit ...I just lovvvvvvvvve Grace's Point of View from this fundraiser talking to one of the BITCH TROLL's friends about Elena fucking a junior in High School and getting in trouble and how Carrick called Grace a Momma Bear...he loved it...I am glad that Carrick didn't get into the Pre Nup shit with Ana and Christian...I always hated that part in the all of the fanficition...Non of his fucking business...

Yeah BITCH KATE...I HATE THAT FUCKING BITCH!

i JUST LOVE GRAMS NON FILTER...SOOOOOOOOOOO FUNNY... KATE IS SO INAPPROPRIATE...NOT EVEN FUNNY...I HAVE ALWAYS HATED HER CHARACTER...ALWAYS TRYING TO YANK CHRISTIANS CHAIN AND GET ANA IN TROUBLE111

Love this chapter about Las Vegas. I absolutely HATE ..CARLA...SHE AND THE BITCH TROLL ARE SISTER WIVES OF SATAN!

Este capítulo es tan significativo, cuándo CG al fin se percata en su conciencia y sentido común que no necesita el BDSM en su vida para ser feliz y tener una relación. Que todo lo que la bruja le dijo nunca fue verdad, tiene una pareja, sus hermanos y sus padres y abuelos en una MARAVILLOSA relación filial!

I cried my eyes out, poor Champs and poor Grampa and Gradma, I have a Dog and I cannot even think about that moment

I really enjoy this story

Every time I read this story my favorite part is Grandpa Theo and the dogs. He is so wise I just love that old man.

Love Elliots toat! Swooooooooon!

OHHHHHHHHHHHHH THE FIRST TIME EVER I SAW YOUR FACE...OHHHHHHHHHHH SWOOOOOOOOON! Best first dance song every!

This was without a doubt the sweetest and most tear jerking wedding I have read...way better than E. L. James wedding in the original book FREED...cried...so touching...the words of Christian about Ana made me swoon...and Ana's words about Christian about the World not knowing My Christian...he is everything good and kind and is my everything...swoon also...every thing Christian needed to hear! These are the Hands that Gramps spoke also tear a tear jerker...Also loved the reflections of Gail and Andrea and Taylor...about Christian and Ana...these two people truly love each other deeply and are truly loved by many many many people...Ana has truly facilitated a deep growth of character to come forth from Christian...I believe it was always within him, Ana just reached in and truly made Christian's heart truly beat like he her. WAY TO GO LILLY...LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU!

SAFETY BELTS IN THE BED? IS THIS FOR REAL? Do they really have them in the bed on private jets or is another funny thing you are adding to the story? I truly love your writing? I think your story is way better than the original Fifty Shades books by E. L. James. Although I loved those books and the story your story with the added humor was waaaaaaaaaaaay better...Love love loved Christian and Elliot's relationship. Sometimes I thought Ana was a bit mean to Christian ...some people didn't like Christian, but I just loved him...my heart just broke for him at times because of all of his trauma as a child and that BITCH ELENA LINCOLN...i WISH SOMEONE WOULD HIRE A HIT MAN TO OFF THE BITCH! I know you give you her just desserts in the next chapter story with the cancer ...I wish you would make her suffer more ...she is truly a EVIL EVIL EVIL CREATURE...NOT HUMAN for what she did to Christian and a teenager and the other young boys she victimized...but that's what Pedophiles do...They grooom the families as well as their young victims... i TRULY BELIEVE GOD HAS A SPECIAL PLACE IN HELL RESERVED SUCH AWFUL CREATURES (they are not human...they a evil creatures!)

RELOAD! so funny coming from Gail!

Nicely done!