|Reviews for Next in Line|
| Troian-Bells chapter 10 . 6/27/2013
I LOVED THIS STORY!
IT WAS SOOOO GOOD!
I laughed, like, the whole way through! It was AMAZING!
| Spoby chapter 10 . 4/5/2013
I very much enjoyed wren and riley. so good :)
| AmyAmilyMe chapter 10 . 3/26/2013
Awww so cute! Loved the first part when Toby was freaking out about the baby comming LOL
| ms-everlarks chapter 10 . 3/26/2013
i loved this story!
| f0r3v3rl4rk chapter 10 . 3/25/2013
Omg! My name is Caitlin too! And spelled exactly the same. Lol but duuuude! The ending man. I almost died! I loved it! It was so unexpected, and that's the best part about it. I love the way you write, it's so unique and you think differently. Like I would expect something to happen but no! You go a totally different way. That's what kept with you for so long, and I can't wait to read any more of you stories.
P.S. I can't get over that you used my name in the story : D and the ending... I seriously reared up. I FRICKIN' LOVE YOU.
| a fan chapter 10 . 3/25/2013
Awe this story is done :( but thank you for all the smiles, laughs, tears, and EVERYTHING! I truly do love you! Thanks for posting such a beautiful story!
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/25/2013
| MEEEEEEEEEE chapter 10 . 3/25/2013
OMGGGGGGGGGGGFGGGGFFDFF?¿?¿!?¿oMg?¿omfg omfg omf OK ok well Omg dude dude dude dude YOu you are the best person on earth, YOu are ok dont let any one one tell you otherwise OK and dmsjzkjsmzdjs. IMIGHT BE DEAD?¿ actually tbh i might be dead tho OMG I JUST IM SMILES EVERYWHERE TNSJZJDJZXKSJDJDJJSJSJDJDSJ AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I'm screaming omg omg omg img nKjz perfection? K so i'm dating spoby's son ALRIGHTY THEN djjsjs *dies repeatidly* right this is cool OK and mckenzie is the cutest ?! Bbsnwjjzshj the mmmmmmmmmdsmsjsjs sx jun dammit ok well? this review sucks but wow perfect everything, congrats on living and im excited for the sequel and seeing Jenna's kids interact with Spencer's omG diesssssssssSSSS bye
P.s. you are the best i love you5ever
P.s.s. this review is horrible it's mostly comsisted of screaming and wOW injust
AnD the WHOLE WREN THING AT THE END OMG SOIFDJJS IT JUST TIES THE STORY SO WELL TOGETHER YOUNKNOW LIKE IT COMES TO A CIRCLE LIKE INLOVE WHEN BOOKS AND STUFF COMES IN A CIRCLE LIKE I PROBABLY SOUND INSANE IF YOU NEVER HEARD ANYONE TALKING ABOUT BOOKS BEING CIRCLES AND SHIT BUT YEAH IM SO DJJSDHJS RIGHT NOW THIS MOST LIKELY MAKES 0000000 sense ok xooxo caitlin
| DreamingintheDark chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
A beautiful ending. I've loved it from the start! You did the closing wonderfully tying everything together. Also I love how you brought Wren back in! It was totally funny! Hope to see more of your writing :)
| Sibuna4260 chapter 10 . 3/25/2013
Great chapter! I loved it! Great way to end it!
| Sibuna4260 chapter 9 . 3/25/2013
Loved it! :)
| Siretha Elaine chapter 10 . 3/25/2013
Oh I loved it. Toby freaking out was so adorable. The real question is: did Spencer ever get her tacos? LOLLLLZ
The ending, Riley and Wren, O-M-G! Epic! I didn't see that coming, so I was completely roaring over here like some crazy hyena. That was a great way to wrap the story up and show how it coincides with the summary.
I can't wait to read more of your work! Stay perfect!
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/23/2013
I just read the story in one go, and aww I love it, like really, for real. The little flashbacks of their past while their kissing is genius, my heart melted at the pasty when Toby said he'll still be with Spence 10years later. Awww, great story! and yay for spoby! My fav story of yours!
| Siretha Elaine chapter 9 . 3/22/2013
This was just A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! To say that I love this story is an understatement. I thought my eyes were playing tricks on me when I saw the email saying you updated. I was sitting at a red light when my phone beeped. I couldn't wait to get home to read the chapter, so I started reading it on my phone. The light turned green and I'm like whatever, still reading. The car behind me had to blow their horn like a maniac to remind me to go. I'm like "B!tch, can't you see you're ruining a perfectly good Spoby moment here? So rude!"
The flashbacks were the best! Pleeeeeeeeeeeease, if you love me (okay, yeah, I get it that you don't know me, but whatever) if you love me, you'll write a prequel to this story that will include Spoby's scandalous high school days and slight flirting and... you know what to do! Pretty please with sexy a$$ Toby Cavanaugh on top? I can't help it, but I'm addicted to your flawless work of fiction. Blame yourself!
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/22/2013
Ahh Spoby kiss! Sooo cutee! Please keep updating!