Reviews for Return
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 10 . 5/27/2014
This story was great.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!
Boostedsixx chapter 10 . 9/5/2013
Ahhhhhh this is getting great! Keep up the awesome work!
Aisha04 chapter 10 . 3/14/2013
Oh my god! Was not expecting that
Amarenima Redwood chapter 10 . 3/9/2013
Yay! I can't wait!
Amarenima Redwood chapter 9 . 2/28/2013
Interesting chapter.
Amarenima Redwood chapter 8 . 2/18/2013
Are we going to find out what was on the parchment?
Amarenima Redwood chapter 6 . 2/7/2013
Great chapter!
Amarenima Redwood chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
Wow! I'm going to have to read that one again to interpret it.
Amarenima Redwood chapter 4 . 1/19/2013
Interesting. I like where this is going.
lucius'sgirl23 chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
I love your story, and all the plots in them. :)
Amarenima Redwood chapter 3 . 1/16/2013
Great chapter.
adrianiforever chapter 3 . 1/16/2013
Great update soon
InezSophia chapter 2 . 1/14/2013
Just to let you know that I love your stories and I never had any difficulty in understanding them! I love your particular style! As to reviews, I must admit that I am one of those that are very, very, very lazy to leave one! But on the positive note some of your stories that I have read are included in my Favourite story list! If you can find a beta it would be better for you as there would be an other person to check it!
Amarenima Redwood chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Yay! Sequel! Great first chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
I've read Back and just read your first chapter but I have a question. I don't wish to cause offence but is this translated into English? Because I really do suggest you get a beta. If this is the way you write then it is very hard to get your head round sometimes and if it is a translation then it is letting down what could be fantastic stories.

It's just really bothered me and I really think Back deserved more reviews and I think it might if the language was better.