|Reviews for The Lost Squad: Stage I|
| wolfeekun chapter 16 . 2/14/2013
Okay, so I've started to read through it, and I have already finished; I'm now going to say a few things. The idea was great, I loved the entire idea; however, in terms of chapter length, this wasn't acceptable. I know that you're new, but look at a few other stories in which their chapters are more detailed, and filled with events that are breathtaking. In terms of character it was bearable; but what you really need to work on is fleshing out the story a bit more, try to expand on what the story is, and above all else never give up.
I know this was semi-lengthy and a bit critical, but it's what I had to go through when I joined this site.
Carry on, Soldier
| ArbyDungDing chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Really nice story, I like where this is going, I;ve read the whole story, REALLY AWESOME!
Can't Wait for GREMLIN!
| cblasze chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Dude why have u stoped writing come on .Awsome.
| Alex chapter 9 . 1/18/2013
Awesome just great man keep it up
| cblasze chapter 8 . 1/17/2013
This is freaking Awsome can't wait to see the rest and thanks for accepting me into The gremlin story can't wait for that to kickoff.
| DarkAssassin21 chapter 7 . 1/17/2013
I can be an ODST and my name I would like to be is Adam
| TunelessLyric chapter 7 . 1/16/2013
I like it so far.
It does need so formatting/editing work, but that will come.
This is starting to be shaping up like one doozy of an AU story. If GREMILN is anything like it, I'll probably die of excitement!
| Nikki chapter 4 . 1/13/2013
| arbiter6784 chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
CHapter 1 has the review w/ the site\
| arbiter6784 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Ok, that site didnt work so here it is: /armor/