|Reviews for Name|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/27
This was written so well I can't hate you for putting my baby through that.
| silentwaltz chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
Pleaaaaseeee continue thissss TT v TT Fei Wang keeps Tsubasa as slave? Or something! Just pleaaassseee
| tsunasoraceillover chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Awwwww poor saryoyan
| Public91998 chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
This... WAS AMAZING! Sequel?
| Kensy Echo chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Wow I like it so much! You make it so detailed and hot! I like tsubasaXsyaoran!clone.
Btw, it's my first time reviewing a FFn with main story is 'lemon' or 'rape', although I've read so many. I just want appreciate your great work! Keep spirit!
| SmileRen chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Oh god I am so sick for reading this but I will admit it was well written, although I'd have prefered it if Fei Wang had stay out of the mix.
| darkchibi-chan chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
I love you so much! Thank you for making this for me, my dear! I loved it! XXXD How it was so detailed...How the torture was! Man, I even cringed when I read the chains part, because that seriously must have hurt! And then how the way his clone was so possessive of him and all... I loved it! I'm sorry it took me so long to review, but I've been tired and lazy, waiting for myself to get more energy so I wouldn't write a lame review, because you deserve better!
Again, thank you so much for writing this! And I love how Branded is coming out as well! :D Hopefully there will be some flash backs that weren't mentioned in this fic? Hehehe, I hope so! Because though I did love this, the double penetration ended so suddenly for me. But it's alright! I loved it anyway! Again, thank you so much! And keep up the good work!
| Purple Parakeet chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
It's annoying how I cant even write my full name up there . It was supposed to say 'The Awesome and Loveable Purple Parakeet but I bet is jealous of my awesomeness and loveableness. wouldn't you agree? ;P
Ahem, well anyways, moving on to the serious reviewing part. I must say you did a brilliant job with the torture parts. I know the whole name telling was a requirement of the request and all but I still think R. Syaoran is the type of stubborn kid who wouldn't do something unless he wanted to (or unless Sakura was in danger and he had to do it to save her or whatnot). He did get stabbed in the leg and still walk around like it was no big deal in Acid Tokyo so I kinda think his will to persevere is VERY strong. he's the kind of guy who'd have bitten off his tongue to not have to say anything if it got that bad but that's just me _;
Your descriptions are getting better and you seem to show a better understanding of what's going on in your characters' heads too so I'd say that's a great improvement too ;)
Even though the clone doesn't really have a heart or anything and he IS pretty much acting on what FWR is telling him to, I kinda feel sorry for him too here since he's going to be very messed up in the head after he's reincarnated and he remembers what he did to poor Tsubasa on his 'master's' orders, no?
| Rosabell chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Eek. As a med student, I can't help but think that Tsubasa is probably dead from hemorrhage. Not to say that this wasn't well written, you did very well with what you knew. Most readers probably wouldn't know what would actually happen when you have those injuries, but breaking bones can totally kill you, and there are a stupid number of blood vessels supplying the rectoanal region and you can bleed to death if they rupture. I only mention this because I feel that a reader could potentially feel even more sorry for Tsubasa if he were starting to pass out, and Fei Wong Reed continued to use him anyway. The way you wrote it kind of undermined the extent of the torture, in a way, because you kind of skimmed over the bone fractures and dislocations and had to work a little bit to remind us that they even happened. The main focus of this fic is obviously the rape, but I don't think it would necessarily take away from the main idea if you devoted a little more attention to the other injuries. Silent suffering, also, can be more dramatic than loud suffering, especially if Syaoran had been quiet because he simply had no strength to scream.
Not really something I would worry about, I'd keep it as is because what you wrote delivered what you promised, and I felt very sorry for Tsubasa.