|Reviews for Cold and Dark|
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/24
good, you redeemed Pitch's OOCness
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/24
this is not pitch. Actually, to be honest, Pitch is a little too OOC for my tastes.
(don't like, don't read.)
Yea, well just stating my thoughts. Something you could improve on, replicating the original character's personality and all.
Besides, if Pitch lost fear, then wouldn't it mean that he "dies" too? And what the heck happened to world domination of fear? What, he actually cares for Jack now? Like, actually?
I find that hard to believe in.
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/24
what. babytooth's dead.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/24
reads the summary.
My honest thoughts: WHAT THE HECK, PITCH WOULD NO WAY IN HELL BE SYMPATHETIC TOWARDS JACK! AW HEEELL NAW! AND IF JACK FORGIVES PITCH, THEN I'M GONNA GO CRAWLY HIDE IN BUNNYMUND'S TUNNELS AND NEVER GET OUT! HE BROKE HIS STAFF FOR JAPAN'S SAKE (wine lol gettit?nah?naw...) WOULD YOU THINK THAT JACK WOULD FORGIVE HIM! huwkaufwhUAKUDHAUKWUFGakwUDHA
Oh wait, lemme just read the first chapter first.
| Guest chapter 17 . 5/12
Finally, a story where Pitch isn't a complete sadistic asshole from Hell without a backstory. A story containing a fluffy fatherly bond with Pitch and Jack where they understand each other. A story with everyone almost 100% in character! I've. Waited. All. My. Life. Thank you, this was so enjoyable to read!
| Littwink chapter 10 . 8/10/2016
| Ethereal Eidolon chapter 17 . 7/13/2016
I think you're the first writer who has actually given us closure in the form of an epilogue when requested. Usually, they're like, "That's the end, take it or leave it." And boy am I glad you did, because that just made for the perfect ending! In all honesty, this story was just too beautiful for words. I cannot express enough how much I loved it! I was looking for some Black Ice romance, but I found this father/son fluff instead, and I can't say I'm disappointed :)
| Hexagonce chapter 17 . 3/15/2016
The love of my life is stories like this. Thank you
| PeterPanfan13 chapter 16 . 2/24/2016
I've already reviewed for this story but I just had to review again!(and I hate that you can only review once per chapter so I had to review on chapter 16 instead of 17) This is one of my FAVORITE fabrics ever! I always get a warm feeling reading this and I can't stess how much of a fantastic job you did! Thank for writing this! And making Pitch a Guardian. You are probably the writer that made me start to see fear as a good thing(for the most part)!
| tanithlipsky chapter 17 . 1/27/2016
THIS WAS AWESOME.
it was ominous at the start then... it became so... so fluffy.
| Mordollwen Castiel chapter 17 . 1/24/2016
Your story was amazing ! I loved reading it :D
You are a really talented writer !
| Yami no Kaiba chapter 17 . 1/3/2016
Very lovely concept. Loved the story in its entirety, but I do suggest that you get it spelling and grammar checked. It would certainly be worth the effort.
| SassySnowflake16 chapter 17 . 11/20/2015
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY HAPPY ENDING. BEST STORY EVER
| SassySnowflake16 chapter 14 . 11/20/2015
| SaphiraRubia chapter 17 . 10/22/2015
This is 1 of my top 3 ROTG stories on the whole site. Fantastic. Amazing. Exquisite.