|Reviews for You Don't See Me|
| The Little Chibi chapter 11 . 2/28
This is a much more realistic outcome of Harry's time spent at the Dursley's.
| Merrri chapter 11 . 2/24
Hey! Great job so far, I'm really enjoying it. I think your premise is well done and the changing relationship between Snape and Harry is being well paced. Nothing bugs me more than people rushing that. Both are complicated individuals who don't trust easily. It's a delicate process to make them get along. I've never seen this take on Lockheart before, but if he could do everything else, I suppose this isn't really much of a stretch... Creep. You've made it work in any case, which is the main thing. Harry's reaction was really good, and the whole thing made me quite uncomfortable, so great writing. :)
I noticed that you were looking for a beta? If you still need one, I'd be happy to help!
Thanks for the story, and I can't WAIT to see where it goes. :)
May your words flow quickly and your ink run smooth.
| scarfire14 chapter 11 . 2/23
i think there may be a riot soon if you dont update!
| thewolf74 chapter 11 . 2/22
I'm so happy that Snape has befriended Harry. I'm also happy that he is doing what he can to protect Harry. I sure hope that Harry tells Snape what Lochart tried to do to him. Please update again very soon. I really want to know what happens next.
| Starlight Angel 12 chapter 11 . 2/20
I love this storyline! I really hope that Snape will lay into Lockhart! That might make me a little vicious, but oh well. Please update soon, as U want to see where you take this! If you need any current or future chapters beta'd, I would be happy to do so!
| jessica.buehrer.52 chapter 11 . 2/19
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Rainy-Round chapter 11 . 2/15
| Steampunk splatter21 chapter 11 . 2/15
keep going I wanna know what happens. I wanna see Lockhart get his come up ins.
| darkhanyouqueen chapter 11 . 2/15
Very interesting story. I look forward to see how you go with it! Especially if Harry mentions the Lockhart incident to Snape.
| mandamichelle chapter 11 . 2/5
Lockhart should get Harry alone attack him then Snape saves him!:)
| knoteach chapter 11 . 2/3
Awesome story! Absolutely love your characterization of Snape and Harry. So looking forward to more whenever you get the time.
| mooncher123 chapter 11 . 2/2
Please update your story is amazing and I think you should add another scene with lockhart to make harry's distress more realistic because the way he's acting now you'd think he was raped so nothing very graphic maybe just some slight groping but that's all trust me it will REAlLy help to develop the storry,keep up the good work - your fan xxx
| Cassandra30 chapter 11 . 1/31
Terrific! I am looking forward to reading more soon!
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| shiver282 chapter 11 . 1/29