Reviews for A Paw in Each World
Orchamus chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Well hell, pretty cool so far, Renee seems like a...yeah, starts with a c, ends with a t, feeling a bit iffy on saying it today, un. Anyway, Kinda funny the interaction between Bella and Charlie, porno-stache, lol.
Frost654 chapter 3 . 4/6/2013
Keep writing, you're amazing. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
-Frost.
Bab.Wau chapter 3 . 4/4/2013
Tehehe, I love the way you characterize Bella :)
Kell1310 chapter 3 . 4/3/2013
enjoying
Athian chapter 3 . 4/3/2013
Great story so far :)
Amelia Dracious chapter 3 . 4/1/2013
Oh wow I wonder what Jessica and Angelas reaction will be when they find out that the Cullens are vamps?Does Alice feel the mating pull towards Bella?How do vamps find there mates in this story?Omg I would have tossed Alices tiny ass for playing games like that Lol
BellaFan chapter 3 . 3/29/2013
Already read and reviewed this chapter but couldn't resist a second time - awesome chapter! Please update soon!
Bladed Darkness chapter 3 . 3/27/2013
Oh, poor Bella. How we love when fate hates her.
Neb87 chapter 3 . 3/26/2013
Great update! like how you write Alice in this. A bit random how we suddenly went from 2 to 4 therecougars but I can dig it for the sake of the story i guess. It'll definitely be an interesting dynamic with Angela and Jessica both. Interesting to see how its gonna go from here, looking forward to the date! With the role reversal and all P.
impatientuser chapter 3 . 3/23/2013
This is a great story and you write Alice extremely well.
ClownWhosFeelnDown chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
nice...
magikedforyou chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
Haha, I like how Alice asked to be the more dominant one in the relationship. Can't wait to see what happens next.
glorymania chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
Hmm.. I like this chapter, but only for the Bellice parts. lol You throw in so many Thercougars into this one and then it's just...chaotic? Hopefully, after we get over this..catastrophe, we'll get to read more Bellice scenes? I like the way that you write. Have you read Blood Solstice? The narrative is almost akin to yours, and I think this story should get more recognition than it already has, you know? Um..what else... OH! I really like how you write Alice's character. She's usually the aggressor in the relationship in most Bellice fanfics I've read, but in this one, I'm really glad you got her to explain how she wants to be the dominant counterpart in their relationship because she's tired of being the pursuant. It's refreshing. As much as I love reading the complicated and twisty plot line about Thercougars and Werewolves, I'd really love to see you write more about vampires and Alice into Bella's perspective. Though that might be a bit of a problem because now you have to deal with Angela and Jessica. *sighs* So ridiculous. lol Anyway, can't wait for the next update, whenever that is. :)
CountingNumbers chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
I love this story! Keep up the good work! (:
Apocalyptic-Wasp chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
Definitely digging this story you have going here. :D
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